Atlas of Divine Weapons

After reading Chapter 275, let me tell you the reason for my negative review. The author made the protagonist unparalleled in the world, but he always emphasized how many days it takes to cast a handful of dot stars when it comes to forging high-grade weapons. Shouldn't being unparalleled mean a handful of hours or a few hours to cast a handful of dot stars? It's not about writing rigorous data on geography and history. It's just a fun read about time travel. It doesn't focus on the key points. It always talks about this and that. It makes it annoying and depressing, so I must give a negative review.

After reading Chapter 35, I really can't stand it anymore. First of all, according to the kind of protagonist written by the author, I think he should not survive until chapter 35. Let's say the protagonist is incompetent. He is capable because of the cheats, but without status, who gives him the courage to keep pretending. Secondly, it takes 200 years for the 8-level Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu to reach the first level (the article does not say whether it is the first level, but it is better than the head catcher who is the first level). Then I would like to ask, how many years have those who have been practicing for the first level or above? ?

Our Lady

The subject matter is novel and the plot is generally good, but the details are all problematic. You can basically watch it without thinking about it, but it is full of problems with thinking about it. The content is awkward and the protagonist speaks without thinking. It can be said that it creates a situation where only the protagonist has a brain, and everyone else is praising the protagonist, and it is embarrassing, like an ordinary person who wants to be a genius.

In order to enhance the plot, I started writing randomly.

It's like shit. Writing a plot is too slow and can make a lot of sense.

Pretending for the sake of showing off, and the routine is the same every time

The front is fine, but the middle and back are unfinished. The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing! Those who are tied up in doing something, are unpopular and single-minded, and those who are determined to follow them are everywhere!

The mouth is always faster than the brain, and the head is green

The logic of the writing is not smooth. Everyone is trying to force their wits down. The protagonist will show off when she has the heart of the Holy Mother. From the beginning of hiding her identity to the later stage of the Ten Kingdoms martial arts performance, everything is written in a mess.