Cousin Wanfu

There is no logic in some parts. The girl is ten years old and the male protagonist is thirteen or fourteen years old. Every day, cousins ​​meet in private and give each other gifts. When they are 9 to 10 years old, they discuss the direction of the court with their cousins ​​every day. It takes more than 300 chapters to deal with one bad guy.

First of all, it can be seen that the author has a lot of cultural heritage. I have read more than 500 chapters so far, and there are a lot of citations from scriptures, which is also very informative. However, when the heroine receives a gift and then praises and praises the quality and meaning of the gift to the "courier" on the side, it seems that the author is deliberately showing off his knowledge and writing. Wouldn't it be better to put this kind of content in a more appropriate place to narrate it instead of letting the heroine talk boastfully to a secret guard? Secondly, because the appearance of the characters is written in great detail, especially the heroine's appearance, body and dress are described every time, the sentences and words are often repeated, giving people a sense of accumulation of words, and the description of the heroine's appearance is always too verbose. Then, I really want to complain about the character setting of the heroine. At the beginning, she is a child with a cute mentality, which is quite cute. After experiencing a nightmare and beginning to transform and grow, it is understandable that he attributes his talents such as intelligence and photographic memory to the golden finger of Linglu. However, you are a ten-year-old girl who can manage a house and is also very smart and worldly in dealing with people (praise: in the author's words, you are worldly but not worldly). As soon as you are in front of your cousin, whom you have only known for a few months, you become stupid and sweet, and treat your cousin like a fool. Cheering, hugging, and saying things that last forever, but also adding the sentence "I don't understand the meaning of these words" (maybe the author wants to describe the heroine as being inexperienced, but some of the heroine's behaviors are really annoying). Isn't this a bit double-faced? Same as split personality. Either he is a love brain, and when it comes to his cousin, he only has eyes for his cousin: Uncle Sun treats his cousin's leg, and the heroine asks questions out of concern and understands everything in detail, but Uncle Sun still has to ask the sidelines when he is sweating profusely after applying acupuncture; the cousin's skin turns red after moxibustion, and she is "worried" that Uncle Sun will burn her cousin. I looked at Uncle Sun; even though I had asked clearly in advance, I still had to watch the acupuncture with my own eyes before I could rest assured. I knew it would take 7 courses of treatment, but when the male protagonist fainted from pain, he still asked if he could stop. I wanted to give up when I saw this. It was like gold. Hostess, are you okay? Just go and eat some plums and don't bother Uncle Sun. You know that you studied pharmacology and don't understand medical science, and you should have cooperated well with the doctor. Why do you want to teach the doctor to do things by giving advice and giving advice when you are here "complaining" about the doctor every day? Finally, the early plot is relatively slow because there is a lot of "foreshadowing" in the background and daily interactions of the male and female protagonists. There are some small bugs that I think are small, such as suddenly writing that the heroine hugs the hero's waist or the hero holds the heroine in his arms, but how do they hug the heroine while the heroine is standing and the hero is in a wheelchair? For example, at the beginning, I mentioned that a mouthful of spiritual dew would condense up to two drops a day. Later, I made so many fragrant medicines, medicinal foods, etc. For my cousin and grandmother, but the use of spiritual dew seemed to be inexhaustible. I wonder if there will be an explanation later. But so far, some of the heroine's behaviors are a bit teasing and a bit divine in my opinion. I can't stand it and I can't stand it anymore. Most of this is my personal experience and opinions, and is for your reference only.

The house fighting part of this book is very interesting. The female protagonist is brave and resourceful, and she has no clues. However, when she comes to the male protagonist, she acts like a little white flower. It is a bit artificial, as if the female protagonist has a schizophrenia. She and the male protagonist quickly watch the scenes.

The idea is great, but the focus is only on sesame and mung beans. There are secrets and quarrels between sisters all day long. Then there are how to go to school, what did you learn in school, how to learn female celebrities and female virtues, and what did you do after learning these? It is such a mess every day, why don't you write about brothers fighting each other to make ends meet? The writing style is good and the literary skills are good, but it seems to show off skills, piling up splendid words and superfluous words, which is flashy and unrealistic. More than three hundred chapters have not yet moved from the inner house to the outside. Doesn't the prince of the feudal lord who has such a big intention and was framed want revenge? It doesn't matter if my legs are bad or my body is not in good health. Every day I hear empty words describing my cousin's beauty and uniqueness. He is also a seal engraver and a piano maker. He is a calligrapher and painter. What kind of peaceful and pastoral married life is this? If you want to write about tactics, just write about tactics honestly. Don't cover up in the guise of tactics. The bits and pieces that are written every day are all the secrets of the inner house. If you want to write about pastoral writing, just write about pastoral writing. Who has a good life these days but has to take the test? Many people like to read and see pastoral writing. Apart from gold and jade, it's not enough to go overboard.

It's pretty good. Why is the score so low?

The author's writing habit is really annoying. Every time an object or character appears, he has to explain it all. I am reading a novel to see the plot direction, not Baidu Encyclopedia. I am speechless. There is no need to describe the heroine's figure every time. The hero and her only met yesterday. What changes can be made?

It's so long-winded, there isn't much plot, and the conversation with my cousin can be written into two chapters. It only took half an hour to read.

How should I put it? The story is good, but very long-winded. I skipped reading it. The heroine is more than nine years old at the beginning but not even ten years old. At the end, she is just fifteen or sixteen years old when she got married. More than a thousand chapters were written in just a few years, which shows that the plot is very delayed. The author's literary skills are undoubtedly good. Various ancient Chinese classics are readily available, which shows that the author has a deep reserve and has put a lot of effort into it. This is originally an advantage, but later on, he spent a lot of text to annotate the quoted ancient texts. For example, for the three songs in the wedding ceremony at the end, the ancient texts may only have 20 or 30 words. The vernacular translation of each paragraph requires at least more than 100 words, which adds up to almost 500 words. However, I have directly crossed this paragraph. In addition, many words are written backwards, and many new words have been coined. Even the dictionary cannot find the meaning. The most impressive thing is that the heroine returns to her mother's house to break away from the "shackles". The word "" written by the author does not show the meaning in the dictionary. We don't know what it means. We can only judge based on the meaning of the article that it should mean "shackles". There is nothing wrong with the author wanting to write in a classical style. Strictly speaking, the writing is actually good. After all, it has a strong literary accumulation as support, and the words are mixed with classical Chinese and vernacular. However, it would be better to put the literal translations of those quotations into the composition. Furthermore, you can use some uncommon words or characters, but don't make up words out of thin air.

The author's writing is very good and the content is good, but the title of the book is easily dissuading. And I came here to watch the house fights. There are basically no house fights in the back, and there are many court halls 😂

The writing is good but too wordy and a lot of nonsense. The first chapter starts with the heroine turning 10 years old. Chapter 400 is the birthday party where the heroine turns 10. I am so speechless. From the beginning to more than 360 chapters, they are all about cousins. There are more than 1,000 chapters in total. 999 Chapters are nonsense.