The Legend of Hogwarts' Top Student

Starting from the magical world of my dreams, Jon Hart started as a 12-year-old child until he became the headmaster and got married, and ended with a "happy" ending that is more like our life, just like going from ideal to reality. Maybe everyone has a different heroine and a different magic dream in their heart, so the ending can never please everyone, but the beginning of the story is always happy, right?

The author doesn't understand the magical world, he only understands 7 of them. It's funny that the author taught the Hogwarts professors Muggle thoughts, and the professors still think it makes sense. Many tributes and allusions have been changed in a mess. I suggest you don't read it to waste your time.

Just don't think too hard. It's a book for a child. Reading it after you are 16 will be more childish. Some of the changes are outrageous. Why did I choose you? There is no system, and he is willing to be cannon fodder, saying that he should be careful. I'm really speechless

Ever since I watched On the Great Sword, I have been unable to watch other movies.

After reading Snake House and Lion House Beginning, I wanted to read Badger House Beginning, so I read this book. I abandoned the book once during this period because the author's word count was too excessive. Even if the characters were given their full names, they also had to add their job titles. I had to write down where I passed each step of the way and down the stairs. Occasionally, I would have to meet a passerby and have a conversation that was not helpful to the development of the plot. The content of the novel is more about a battle of wits, but it is not exciting enough. It seems that the protagonist is relatively useless. To defeat Voldemort, you have to rely on deception and sneak attacks. Moreover, the author likes to hide his writing by talking and panting, which made me quite speechless. However, there are still some contents in the book that are well written, which is why I did not give a negative review.

The male protagonist is written as a deep well of ice. Faking death during the Triwizard Tournament can be understood as cowardice, as he did not want to confront Voldemort, so he faked his death and changed schools; but after faking his death and immediately returning to Hogwarts as an exchange student, this operation was really brain-burning, and it was a bizarre plot that could only be seen in a thousand years. This operation has no meaning except that the girl he loves almost died of grief and all his friends held a funeral for him. After reading more than two hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. LJ novel.

This time-travel HP fanfic, which was completed in 20 years, is the author's only completed novel. The main character in this book has relatively few tricks. In addition to being familiar with the plot and biological knowledge, there is only one who has an extraordinary memory, almost a photographic memory, and is different from ordinary people in terms of herbal medicine and potions. The logic of this book is clear and the plot is smooth. It interprets the original plot from another angle and adds details. In contrast, there are all kinds of controversies about this book. The first one is the second setting of the book. For some readers, this is the most difficult part to adjust. I can only say to read a few dozen chapters first to see if it can be finished. But as far as this book is concerned, I think the first few dozen chapters are not very good and are very easy. This part of the readers will be discouraged; the second thing is the title of the novel. Although it is a legend of a top student, the protagonist does not behave very much in line with the public's understanding of a top student. This is a matter of opinion. I think it is not bad if the protagonist can achieve such a level without cheating the system. Then there is the issue of the heroine. I feel that the protagonist in the previous life was in her twenties, and in this life she has been here for more than ten years, and together she is forty. I have the nerve to find a girl in her teens, but I think this is actually a normal arrangement. Unless the heroine is not written, it will be difficult to escape this problem: If you write If the protagonist finds a heroine who matches his psychological age, it will appear to others that the protagonist has found someone who is several decades older than him, which would seem strange. If the protagonist finds a heroine who is similar to his actual age when he becomes an adult, it will be similar to now. Besides, there aren't really many choices for female protagonists in fan fiction, just a few. In the end, because there is no system and no cheats, the protagonist's strength has never been shown. He only operates and deploys behind the scenes. The whole book is not that exciting. The plot of the whole book seems to be relatively bland, and it requires a little patience to read it. To sum up, this book is relatively rare in HP fan fiction. If you can accept the author's second hypothesis, it is still worth reading. Again, I believe this book will bring a good reading experience to some readers.

The first half was pretty good, but the second half was completely broken. . . The emotional line is even more weird and outrageous

There's something wrong with this protagonist's head

Just so-so, a little different than expected