Our Girl Next Door

The writing is long-winded. It is about a heroine doing business. I haven't finished more than 100 chapters. I sit at the hero's house every day and write nonsense. I really can't stand this kind of article that only has a few words. The writing is poor. Please learn more about how to focus on the key points. Give up.

The selection of materials is good, with familiar stories and eloquent stories, showing the spirit of the heroine who fights hard for a family and for women to stand in the world. In short, it makes people want to watch it, but the update is too slow, I look forward to the update.

I've been reading Xian Da's books all the way here, and this one is my favorite. In the past, Xiandai always had dozens of lengthy chapters and countless character relationships, which I often couldn't remember. This one is significantly improved, very good! Although the characterization and dialogue feel a bit familiar, it is still very exciting. It filled in a lot of my blanks in humanities and history.

Although it is a leisurely book, it is difficult to live up to its reputation. It is quite boring, verbose and boastful... 1. In the opening chapter, the heroine takes the exam for her brother to take the scholar exam. Why can't many familiar people see the difference in size and appearance? How did she succeed in taking the exam? Brainless and speechless. 2. The heroine comes from time travel, but where is the cleverness? It's all bits and pieces, petty and careful, the family's preserved egg business was funded by the male protagonist, and the rental loom was poached and lost. What can the female protagonist do without the male protagonist providing money and influence to help? 3. When the male protagonist is reborn, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in his previous life will be obscured by the author's writing. The male protagonist comes to the female protagonist for this reason. He has been praising the female protagonist, but the more he looks at the female protagonist, the more she collapses. 4. The worst thing is that it's unfinished. It seems like the author can't continue writing. It's not a farming business story, nor a plot-heavy story, nor an emotional romance story. The main plot has been torn apart, and it's completely unfinished. I'm speechless...

After the female protagonist passed the scholar examination, she became a scumbag with high ambitions and low abilities, relying entirely on the male protagonist to carry out her so-called money-making business. Regarding the docks and taxes, the writing is completely unreasonable. First of all, the terminal cannot only unload goods from the ship, but also load them. Secondly, silk tea is for export and should be loaded rather than unloaded. In addition, the porters should have a foreman, and the foreman and the cargo owner will set the loading and unloading charges. There is no need for the official to record the number of times the workers have moved. Finally, to determine whether the owner of the goods has evaded taxes, the problem can be discovered by the number of times the goods are moved, but what is needed to finalize the decision is to check the goods and the manifest.

So beautiful! Please update more if you have time❤️

The heroine is average, the article ends inexplicably, not as good as Hawthorne

How ugly! The relationship between the characters is very confusing and disorganized. It started out pretty well, but gradually got messy, with many characters only appearing in one chapter. The ending was even more speechless, and I added a full stop in a hurry. I was still wondering, is this a break from updating? Does the author have no plot to write?

I didn't understand it, so I took the exam for me right away without explaining why. Why a girl studies better than her brother.

As soon as I started watching it, I saw that updates were stopped two months ago. This is like an unfinished project.