I Just Won Over My First Love, and Now My Childhood Friend Is Panicking

It's really out of line and nonsense. Even this kind of literature dares to be published in a book. Even elementary school compositions are better than the author's.

I think the first part is better, a slap-in-the-face kind of cool story, but the second part is a bit too outrageous! 😓

The plot is terrible and the emotional scenes are simply too ugly to watch.

It's an ugly batch. I originally didn't want to comment and just abandoned the book. The more I thought about it, the angrier it became.

The first part was okay, but the more I wrote, the more I went off topic. Was it written by two authors?

The further I read, the less I understood it. Slowly, it became a novel about cultivating immortals. I skipped through it, but I couldn't stand it any longer, so I gave up on it.

To be honest, this novel is the most rubbish of all the novels and software I have read. It is totally wrong. Furthermore, the author definitely has no diploma and does not know how to read. In short, this novel is too rubbish. Avoid being caught in the trap.

It's really a brainless article, with no ideas at all.

Although the plot between the male and female protagonists and the bitch being licked is not bad, the other plots become more and more messy as they go on. The system text is very messy, and the rest of the story is as messy as cultivating immortals.

It's disgusting. Not many normal people can watch it while dancing.