Cultivation Craze

If you want to talk about writing style, yes. But there is too much nonsense and too many watery words. When you meet some strangers, the protagonist will show off his skills and introduce them in a long way. The protagonist's stuff is extraordinary, awesome, and extraordinary, and he will highlight his pretentiousness at every turn. It's fine at the beginning, but generally skipped in the end. Because it was just written for the sake of writing, just to make up the number of words, it does not help the plot. For example, later on, the protagonist has to track an enemy and shows off his tracking skills. He not only introduces this skill, but also brags about how awesome the Alchemy King is. He has everything, and also tells others that they guessed correctly that he has an extraordinary inheritance, but they are not all right, etc. If he shows his tracking skills, he can write a few hundred words that have nothing to do with the plot. You will know how low the plot content is. One million words may contain more than 300,000 words, or even more than 300,000 words.

It shouldn't look good. His ten updates are not as many as those of others in one day. You can refer to The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races. More than 5 million words and 2,000 chapters. That book is more than eight million words. 900 Stamps. But I still gave it. At least I can watch it

The book is okay, but I really admire the people in this book. There are more than two thousand pictures in total, and half of the chapters are sensational, shocking, shocking, etc.! The people in this book have great mental endurance! It's so exciting that it doesn't even kill you? ? Maybe you're used to it! !

I have just read Chapter 12, so let me talk about my thoughts on the first 12 chapters. First of all, I look at the preliminary world view. I really like it. It belongs to the category of invasion of the spiritual world. After hundreds of years of hard work, it has gradually stabilized. The protagonist's failure is not the system. The classic schoolmate looks down on people and the villain, this is acceptable. In these 12 chapters, the most common adjective used to describe classmates is sixteen or seventeen years old. The author doesn't know any other adjectives. I don't know if the rest of it is good or not, but I was persuaded to quit after only reading chapter 12. This is the first one.

I couldn't tell the priorities. I worked part-time after school just to get paid to do things. As a result, I wrote several long chapters. Even when I was in school, I still kept thinking about other people's homes. Thoughts 🈶Questions, when answering questions in class, you don't forget to flatter the female class monitor. You are a woman when you go to work, you are a woman when taking alchemy exams, you are a woman when you go to the black market, even the girl is rewarded for her live broadcast, and she controls whether she is a boy or a girl, a typical animal story. The ink is not enough, but it is installed in the sky. The operations of alchemy (burning fire, adding water, adding herbs), the process and results are all based on blowing. The nonsense always compares with some inexplicable things. The skeleton is okay, but the mud cannot hold up the wall.

There is so much nonsense, if only it could be revised to reduce the number of words by 2/3. Then there are several repeated patterns. The more I watch, the more I vomit, and the more I watch, the more rubbish I get.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is okay. It's worth watching.

There is too much nonsense. None of the journal essays I wrote when I was in school contained so much nonsense.

Another article that is about swatting flies and praising stinky feet from beginning to end. It's really boring.

The writing is really messy. The body of the emperor-level exercises is powerful. I don't see where it comes from. Just use ordinary fire to make elixirs and add water. You don't need to worry about it. You are born with it because of inheritance. There are also pills, from the acquired eighth level reminder to the innate seventh level suppression, without mentioning the physical load at all, just improve it casually; I have experienced so many beast tides in the early stage, and each time I write that the whole person is different, and the virtual terminal, how did you come up with it? Does the virtual terminal use a wireless signal? It is said that the signal is blocked, and the Emperor's inheritance has not mentioned it. I don't know where the magic weapon comes from, but it can also boast of world communication. It's really funny.