Sky and Sky

When you read Chapter 3, the word 'performance art' even appeared? It's not from modern time, so why is there this word? Also, such a great master among masters, he looks like a fool after being reborn!

In order to avenge his friends, Ye Xiao challenged the three major sects alone. Although he was extremely brave, he died heroically due to his weak strength. However, he did not really die, but was reborn as a playboy of the Ye family in Hanyang Continent. In this life, he obtained the heavenly secret treasure "Endless Space" and the top-grade spiritual treasure Tianjing Spiritual Essence, and even re-cultivated the heaven-defying "Purple Qi Eastward Magic Art". In the process of rebirth, Ye Xiao transformed into the "Feng Zhiling", the king of Lingbao Pavilion, and started a fierce game of wits with Fanyunfanyulou. He even personally took command and successfully defeated the Blue Wind Empire and resolved the crisis in the Chen Emperor Empire. As a result, his cultivation level was promoted to the Lingyuan Realm and to the Qingyun Heavenly Realm. After entering the Heavenly Realm, Ye Xiao gained ten thousand years of cultivation by swallowing the inner elixir of the golden-scaled dragon fish. After undergoing the baptism of thunder and calamity, he successfully shaped the nine-turn exquisite body, and was appreciated by Hanyue Tiange and accepted as a disciple. After saving Qingyun Tianyu and ascending to the world of mortals, Ye Xiao gathered the world's masters, founded the Monarch Pavilion, and obtained the inheritance of two supreme beings. His longing for Jun Yinglian inspired him to break through to the fourth level of the "Purple Energy from the East". With a breakthrough in his state of mind and his father's teachings, his cultivation reached the peak of the eighth level of the Immortal Realm. In the decisive battle with Emperor Nantian, he successfully broke through the love barrier and his strength soared to the peak of the eternal realm. In the battle at the Supreme Mountain, he broke through the boundaries of the Supreme Realm, unified the world outside the world of mortals, and finally broke through the shackles of planes and climbed to the top of the dome. Ye Xiao took his lovers to the chaotic starry sky and started a new journey. Until "The World Beyond the World", Ye Xiao established the Hall of Life and Death with a grand layout. What I didn't expect was that after finishing "The World Beyond the World", he would finish the whole book. Did I make a mistake? This is the end!

Too much nonsense, repeated over and over again, there are 5 women in more than 100 chapters, and I don't know how many more will follow.

No, in Chapter 603 of Volume 2, didn't Jun Yinglian know Bing Xinyue? Didn't you always say that they were best friends before? It's Jun Yinglian from the End of the Sea and Bing Xinyue from Misty Clouds and Mist. Before, Bing Xinyue specifically told Jun Yinglian about Ye Xiao. How come Jun Yinglian didn't know about Bing Xinyue after Bing Xinyue died? Jun Yinglian must have been there when Bing Xinyue's apprentice went to take revenge. He also said that he knew about this and knew that one of them died and one of them was seriously injured because of Ye Xiao's incident, but he didn't say a word to her best friend.

I read it in 2014, when I was still waiting for an update. Then I gave up reading it for some unknown reason. During this period of time, I was short of books. I coincidentally resumed reading it. However, when I read the second volume, the plot was confusing. Why did I feel that the protagonist had no IQ, and his mind was all about men and women. After reading the second volume, I felt like I was being forcibly de-intellectual.

It's not like the rebirth of a strong man, but his mentality is like the rebirth of a novice.

Bad writing, verbose and wordy! Get rid of 2/3 of the stacked text, and only the rest will do!

I have read more than 100 chapters. I thought it was okay at the beginning, but I couldn't hold on anymore. There was too much nonsense, a bunch of dialogue at random, and the plot development was too slow and boring!

Not as good as the Proud Nine Heavens

I have been a fan of Feng Da for 7 years. I have read all of Feng Da's novels. They are really good and the writing is so good that they are instantly popular.