The Legitimate Eldest Daughter Is Both Beautiful and Dazzling

I've reached almost 500 chapters, and I almost have no patience to read anymore. The plot is okay, my literary skills are quite strong, and the theme of family and country is also very good, but I feel uncomfortable at all after reading it for a long time. The story is told in modern Chinese, but some of the characters' dialogues are archaic, which makes the reading extremely awkward and unsmooth (this feeling is particularly obvious when listening to the book). Moreover, a large number of plots and sentences are repeatedly emphasized through different occasions and characters, which may seem reasonable, but it feels like the word count is just being crammed. Throughout the article, a large number of complicated, gorgeous and wordy words are used to describe the scenes and characters - two words: show off, three words: too annoying, four words: too much is not enough...

The book is worth reading, the writing is good, the descriptions of big scenes are soul-stirring, and the details are meticulously controlled. The heroine is courageous and courageous without losing the tenderness of her family. The emotional pull and mutual achievements between her and the hero are also touching. I have been chasing more than 200 chapters and can't stop~~Oh... More than 1,500 chapters are a bit too long😜😜Take a break for two days before continuing👀👀

This is a novel that made me burst into tears, although I admit my tears were a little low. The author must have read military literature, right? So awesome. The only thing I feel is that the age of the characters in the article is unreasonable, and some plots are a bit redundant. For example, the Xiliang princess should be killed directly. I don't know how to write a book review, so I just write these two sentences.

It starts high and goes low, not to mention repetitive words. I found it exciting and touching at first, but I skipped it after it kept appearing. The male protagonist's character also collapsed. In the later stage, he looked like a despicable villain. He also used the excuse of talking about politics rather than romance, and told Ayu's identity to Xiliang several times. The heroine didn't reveal that he was Dayan's Ninth Prince. 🙄The story got worse and worse from now on. When I saw them sleeping together, I was really speechless. I didn't expect that I got pregnant after the first episode. The plot was really vulgar enough, so I abandoned the article.

It starts high and low, and the more it writes, the more wordy it becomes. It is like a chicken soup for the soul that shouts slogans. It is empty. The emotions of the male and female protagonists are even more like plastic people. They create a tall but lost aura. They are also very abrupt and difficult to remember.

First of all, from the beginning, I thought this novel was very interesting. I even read it all night until the male protagonist appeared. I endured it again and again. I really couldn't bear it anymore and I didn't read the rest of the novel. The author ruined the female protagonist and male protagonist. The female protagonist was late in love. The male protagonist kept backstabbing the female protagonist and used the country as an excuse. He made the female protagonist pregnant and didn't want to take full responsibility. I couldn't stand it anymore! This is the first time I hate a male protagonist in a novel so much! He starts stroking the heroine in the first place, and the heroine doesn't know what the author is thinking. The relationship between the two started out of nowhere. Isn't it good for the heroine to be the only one who is beautiful?

The first time I gave up after reading more than a thousand chapters because the male protagonist was nauseating. I read it because of a well-reputed female protagonist. It turned out that the male protagonist was like a follower. He would kiss the female protagonist without even saying a few words and regardless of the occasion. He wanted to be nice and polite, but he couldn't win over the male and female protagonists. This male protagonist is not as likable as the male protagonist in Mary Sue's novel. He is really out of place in a story with a female protagonist.

The revenge for Bai Jiaerlang was very interesting in the past, but I didn't think it was very interesting when the heroine became the emperor. Moreover, I didn't like the heroine's lack of defense against the enemy king, the hero, and the hero also used the information he got from the heroine to benefit the country of Yan. What the hero said when the heroine first talked about winning or losing based on national policy really made people dislike the hero. This book is about starting high and moving low, and there is too much verbosity at the end. And I was very excited to watch it in the beginning, but in the end, it was only the Bai family's revenge for destroying Xiliang and the death of the King of Hancheng in the battle to destroy Dongyi that aroused my interest.

The first quarter is okay, but the rest of the content is similar and repetitive.

I saw a book where the heroine got pregnant without a matchmaker and abandoned it! The book started with "The High-Level Bureau of the World, Family and Country", and the opening words were verbose and long-winded. I have never seen such a disgusting emotional drama between a male and female protagonist. The two countries are hostile and plot to devour each other. How do you turn around and betray your family, friends, and country while still really liking each other? With such a high score, didn't all the book lovers give it a little thought?? Is there any place that is reasonable?