The School Beauty's Personal Expert

Originally, if I had finished this book before Tianjie Island, I would have given it full praise. It was really good to read. However, the writing started to fall apart from the moment Tianjie Island was about to open. The characters were intellectually unresponsive, the writing was rough, and the logic did not make sense. Some characters even forgot to write. It was not delicate at all and was completely unreadable. It can be seen that the rest of the book was completely coping with work. But Tianjie Island was really good to watch before, especially Yaoyao, Xiaoshu, Tang Yun, Xiaoxiao, Wang Xinyan, Jingjing, Xiao Sha Niu and several other villains, as well as several villains such as Zhong Pinliang, Zhao Qibing, Kang Zhaoming, etc. The characters are very well portrayed. Another point is that the villains live for too long. They repeatedly mess with the people around the protagonist and touch the bottom line, but they are let go every time. It is very frustrating to watch.

The indecisiveness is entirely to cope with the novel. Newcomers don't need to read down when they see the island of heaven. As the writing goes on, it becomes more and more boring. It feels like watching a son-in-law. He has been mocked in the face. It is really frustrating to read. It is obvious that he can be slapped to death, but he pretends to be a good guy, treats the villain as a fool, and treats the readers as fools! One star is too much

It's been over 10,000 chapters, but Lin Yi is still a virgin 😂😂

Not finished yet? I stopped reading it after reading more than 2,000 chapters 10 years ago. Suddenly I saw this novel again

Secular world: Wang Xinyan, Chu Mengyao, Chen Yushu, Tang Yun, Song Lingshan, Guan Xin, Yu Ning, Yang Qiqi, Sun Jingyi, Feng Xiaoxiao, Yu Xiaoke, Chen Xi, Song Ling, Ying Ziyu, Xu Shihan, Bingtang, Xueli, Han Jingjing, Cheng Yiyi, Tian Chan, Tu Ranran (Xiaojiu), Tiandie Tianjie Island: Shangguan Laner, Ning Xuefei, Huang Xiaotao, Huo Yu Butterfly, Ni Caiyue, Li Zaoyi Taigu Xiaojianghu: Leng Leng, Duanmu Yu Abandoned Land: Wu Yuhua Vice Island: Wu Yucao, Black Wild Flower, Su Yumo, Luo Caidi Qin Mengzhen, Ling Yingying My harem eunuch article, this thing is really awesome, I just read more than 8,000 chapters, brothers, please check and fill in the gaps.

The more I listen to it, the less interesting it becomes. Don't know what you are talking about? At first, I could still hear it from the secular world to the Heavenly Island. I don't even know what I'm talking about now. It seems like they are all acting on their own, there is no plot at all. In the past, when watching or listening there, I felt like I was the protagonist. Now I can't hear anything. Why

It was okay at the beginning, but it got really boring later on. The villain has lived for thousands of chapters and is still jumping around. I don't know what the author's purpose is in writing so many planes. I have tolerated all the ancient small rivers and lakes before, but I really can't stand it on Fuidao. I am totally acting as a patrol envoy there. I am not looking for Wang Xinyan to save mankind on Fuidao. Wang Shiyang didn't want to save him anymore. He was just there fighting with a bunch of little Luo Luo with nothing to do. I really felt that being his female brother was really hard, and it was all over the place. He was still an old virgin and an old maid there, just like elementary school students. They separated when they met and did nothing. It was just two sentences: I can't let you go, and you can't let me go. What makes me speechless the most is the title of the male protagonist at the end. Won't everyone feel embarrassed about the pretentious leader's method of controlling big feet? In the beginning, I agreed to accompany Senior Sister Shangguan to the Xuanjie Sea. However, I haven't gone back for several years. I am still so decisive in my killings. I haven't killed many people in the whole book. I really don't know how to pick up girls. I can't say that my training is bad. I have a medium rating. The most speechless thing is that the male protagonist keeps emphasizing that he is not a scumbag. He's awesome. , There are already more than a dozen wives there, and they like one after another. To be honest, for this kind of plot, in terms of authenticity, Wang Xinyan and Chu Mengyao have not seen the male protagonist in the past few years, and their children can call him uncle. As long as there are handsome men chasing those female protagonists, who can't catch up with them in a few years? Really, I really feel that it is really pitiful to be his female brother. He has cultivated a lot of enemies in various planes and did not solve them himself. Now he is meddling in that sub-island. He should go to improve his strength early and go to Wang Xinyan. I don't know what the author wants. What should I write about? I have written about so many planes, why not just write about two secret realms? There are also those villains from the secular world all the way to Tianjie Island. The center has killed him several times. I don't know how his wife and younger brother survived. It is really unrealistic. And when it comes to the back, he is like a born masochist. Anyone can say a few words about him, anyone can ride on his head, and the male protagonist doesn't take it seriously. He is really a cat or a dog, and he can even mock him. It really made me want to throw my phone, and it is also very boring. It is written about the patrolman and the lobby master. Those things made me really want to sleep, and what about the bigfoot control method, and the pretense of being the leader, it really made me embarrassed to death. I only just nodded my acquaintance with Wang Shiyang, so I left him to the big frog and didn't save him for several years. I don't know what the author thought. I have read almost 9000 chapters now and I really can't stand it👎

The language and writing style used in the novel are very beautiful, and it is smooth and enjoyable to read. The words are just right and can accurately express the emotion the author wants to convey.

When I first saw it, I was still a virgin, but now I'm already in trouble 😂

Anything with a long word count is full of nonsense, and one topic can last for several chapters.