The Book-Traveling Villain: Dig Out the Heroine's Supreme Bone at the Beginning

All I can say is that it's like writing a composition. The master doesn't act like a master, the master doesn't act like a master, and the apprentice doesn't act like an apprentice. It's like playing house, and quarreling is like a verbal fight. It's really cool.

Su He: He has a complex and multi-faceted character. He not only has the ruthlessness and determination of a villain, but also has the struggle against fate and the desire for the future. He used his prophetic ability and powerful strength to change his destiny step by step, showing extraordinary wisdom and courage. Xu Qing: Xu Qing's betrayal makes people sigh. Her image changes from a pampered disciple to a traitor desperate for love, making people feel both sympathy and anger for her fate. Raymond Lam: As the protagonist of Destiny, the setting is full of legend. He is majestic and impressive, and not only attracts Xu Qing's heart, but also becomes the main obstacle for Su He to change his destiny. In short, the distinctive characters are the charm of this book and it is worth recommending.

What do you think, author? A shabby Lin Feng wrote that he has not yet finished writing and his previous state was also very confusing. Fang Xinyi, when she participated in the Hundred Sects Competition, she was not at the seventh level of martial arts master (don't be stubborn with me, just read the first one or two chapters before the sect competition. She was already at this level). After participating, she returned to the sect to practice but was reduced to the fourth level of martial arts master.

As for this book, I can only say that it is very average, the writing is a bit wordy, the pace is slow and there is nothing outstanding, and the most speechless thing is, does the author regard Lin Feng as the final boss? This is the protagonist of Destiny, and he's still alive after writing it. It makes me so angry that I don't even want to say anything. Let's just leave it at that. Let's go away🙃🙃

The writing relies on traces💩! The sect leader does not have the majesty of a sect leader, and is even ridiculed by people with lower cultivation levels than himself🤮The protagonist is a decent person in the skin of a villain, but on the contrary, those decent people are all insidious and make things difficult for the protagonist. This is a villain article. The author doesn't know how to write villains at all, and he is not decisive at all. He released a dragon and was killed by others as soon as he left... What he wrote is inexplicable. The emotional line is also weird. I saved a phoenix as a pet, and that night the phoenix used its own body to repay the favor. Is this something a human being can write? I came here to suppress the so-called decent people, but I still feel so aggrieved when I read a villain article🤮

If you take a treasure that can improve your cultivation and don't give it to yourself, let it go to your disciples, not to mention that you have enemies who are more powerful than yourself! ! Got it! ! !

I said, author, your writing is a bit too confusing in this realm. The early stage was fine. When I got to the back of the Saint, I felt a bit broken. What Wu Zunna or something, are you a rebel? Isn't Wu Zun the most advanced realm?

The cultivation level is too messy, and it's also too wordy. The most important thing is that there is only one protagonist. People just write it to death in twenty or thirty pictures and strip everything away. It's very difficult for you to write it to death. The most important thing is that you have already slept with him, and you still want him to be your apprentice. What logic?

I watched 160 out of boredom, so I'm halfway through it! Not recommended to watch 1. I don't know the background of the plot, but Dongzhou (the main character, the sect leader of the Holy Land, is just a sect to put it bluntly), Zhongzhou, is gone? Second, the martial arts levels are spread across. There are currently four levels: Martial Master, Martial King, Venerable, and Semi-Saint. Three, the protagonist is really the protagonist, and breakthrough requires massive resources, 4

The previous chapter was okay. Around Chapter 260, the protagonist went down the mountain to sell jade. After changing one by one, it immediately cracked. Now the King of Martial Arts, now the Lord of Martial Arts, the Martial Master, and even the Yuan Ying and the God of Transformation all came out. It was outrageous. Then the protagonist became more and more obsessed with it, and it felt like it was written by a different author. If I hadn't read it before, I would have given it a negative review. But the Destiny Child in the front was really outrageous. It was a bit annoying, but it was also an interesting point. After all, I wanted to see him die, but after more than 260 chapters, he was not dead, and the plot was messed up. I skipped to the chapter and read it. He was not dead either, and I was speechless.