The Married Woman Is a Thief of a Prosperous Husband

The writing style is childish, and the heroine Madonna especially describes the hero's feelings for the heroine. Why does it look so awkward? The heroine saved someone, and the hero fell in love with the heroine even more. The article reads: "In the courtyard, Gu Silang listened to the vague and intermittent words, and his heart fell more in love with Lin Zijiao. It turned out that his daughter not only knew how to do business, but also had a chivalrous heart. How could people not love her like this? How lucky is he to be able to get a wife in this life? "It's okay to write like this. I think the writing style is too childish and self-defeating."

It looked pretty good at first, but it became more and more wordy as I wrote. The old house family garbage has reached more than 100 chapters. I can't stand it anymore, even if I drag it on

The front is okay