After Being with Bai Yueguang, the School Beauty Went Crazy

The writing is very good. The only thing that is not ideal is that the rich and super rich second generation are often added in, and these unnecessary factors are added into the story, which makes it distorted. After all, there will be so many rich relatives in that school. They are basically ordinary people. Anyone with a net worth of tens of millions is considered a rich man. There is really no need to make the background too big, which will make the progress of the plot feel depressing and unsmooth.

The writing is okay. The beginning was so rushed that I shed tears. Don't write it to waste. Just keep writing it like this. Don't stop at the end. If it's not finished, please update it as soon as possible!

The male protagonist doesn't know what he's doing. He lets the green tea girl and the scumbag fool around all day long. I'm drunk. I already have the power and ability. I don't know how to fight back. I just watch those two Lackeys keep causing trouble.

This book is the same as Lin Zhou and Xu Nianchu

At the beginning, the plot was a bit like the one by Lin Zhou and Xu Nianchu, but after Si Fu appeared, there were original plots. Overall, it was okay. There is a very fatal problem. There are really too many typos. I hope the author can correct this.

There are so many typos! ! Didn't you check it after you finished writing?

This is a relatively bad rebirth novel. The earth-shattering oath at the beginning is a complete fart. The tea smells like tea. It's disgusting!

The beginning of this book is almost exactly the same as the other one. I can't read a little bit about it. It doesn't matter what the background is, but your plot is almost the same and it's too outrageous. Moreover, there are so many typos and the writing style is so-so, which is an obvious attitude problem. All I can say is don't look.

I don't trust the female protagonist, the male protagonist is too rubbish

After all, the novel is different from reality. I thought it was a two-way journey, but I didn't expect it to be wishful thinking.