Ace Special Forces

I haven't read much, just the previous one. I'm an old bookworm. Let me share my feelings about some of the plots in your book. The first thing is about the character of the captain of the protagonist. She is beautiful, 178cm tall... Has an impulsive personality and does things regardless of the consequences. When the doctor is shot, he immediately goes to rescue him? Don't you even investigate the surrounding area? Is this a national security officer? The first requirement for national security personnel is to be cautious and look ordinary, that is, they will not attract attention in the crowd. Also, there were conflicts with the male protagonist in the early stage, but also emotions during the later missions? Ordinary soldiers know that the mission comes first, and no personal emotions are allowed to be involved during the mission... And you said that the graphene developed by the doctor has not even been developed by the United States, so China sent two people here first? Is there no one locally to respond? What era is it in the book now? I dare say that in any country in the world, there are hidden Chinese investigators, that is, spies. The United States does not have such an important achievement like graphene, and you are threatening your family. Do you believe it? When the country knows that the doctor's research and development is successful, it will protect his family as soon as possible. You think of the country too simply, and you feel like a novice.

As long as you are not a cultivator, you will look good.

It's pretty good to watch, but the ending is too sloppy, right? It ended after digging so many holes without filling them in?

The writing is really terrible. You are the first person to write about soldiers like this. If this kind of book can be put on the shelves, I doubt that you are planning to smear China with 500,000 yuan.

The seven deadly sins in this book: 1. Many of the plot logic does not make sense (the heroine was drugged, and the first thing she did when she woke up was not to seek revenge on that person, but to deal with the company, and then never mentioned this matter again. The heroine is really too selfless) 2. There is no priority (the main plot of the 300 chapters is still unknown, headless, and disgusting) 3. The plot connection is not smooth (when you have just completed a plot, you need to buffer it appropriately. It is good for you. You just finished a fight, ran to the other side to save people, and then ran to fight a new fight after saving) 4. The character design is not distinctive enough (the protagonist is just a gangster) 5. The author lacks common sense in life (the heroine's father died of carbon dioxide poisoning? Are you sure it's not carbon monoxide? I'm sure she never went to junior high school) 6. The plot collapses and there is a strong sense of fragmentation (a plot full of water) 7. The emotional drama is just a mess (the male protagonist is Lei Feng in the new era. He saves people without expecting anything in return. The rescued female character doesn't even know how to repay her kindness. How many lives have been saved, and she still has a cold face? Even a hero who saves a beauty would not be obscene) (Additions welcome)

A different kind of Lei Feng in the new era.

The more I look at it, the worse it gets

The front looks good, but there is no idea behind it? Written in a mess

The writing is a mess, and the protagonist is too stupid, stupid, and self-righteous. A task is always written halfway through, and it's all just talk. The protagonist doesn't have a decisive character. Zhao Nan basically wrote it to death near the end. There were too many words. Go and read what other people wrote about the Special Forces series. Your writing was not passionate or passionate at all. I didn't feel the brotherhood at all. It was only when the old leader was about to die.

The first part is okay, but the second part starts with more than 200 chapters and covers supernatural events. Tasteless, ugly,