Enlightenment to Heaven

I'll test the poison

The first part was interesting, but the second part was a mess due to the author's poor writing skills. Starting from the Third Level of Gathering Spirits, the author began to develop the plot in leaps and bounds. There are many scenes and fights that could be written very excitingly, but it is a pity that they are all covered in one or two strokes. Especially for crossing the Sea of ​​Death, dozens or hundreds of chapters could be written to show the dangers and unpredictability of the Sea of ​​Death. For example, there are many people who bravely cross the sea but are trapped in the islands in the sea, and there are sects with alternative monks who guard sea beasts, etc. After entering the Tianwu Continent, the cultivation and plot rhythm have collapsed. Even after writing the last chapter, there are still a lot of holes that have not been filled. The God Realm, the Styx River Region, the four major families of the God Realm, Tianchenfeng's life and death are uncertain, the Three Thousand Worlds, etc. There are no relevant plots. It is embarrassing not to even mention the realm. Even Uncle Mu has the cultivation level of the God Realm. Is the head of the Tian Family in the God Realm only the peak of the God Realm? There are also quite a lot of loopholes. The mortal world is not allowed to reach the divine realm. The protagonist's soul has awakened and cultivated to the middle stage of divine realm. Shouldn't the rules of heaven and earth be thunderous and windy? It is always said that the protagonist has extraordinary intelligence and cannot even use strange fire when fighting. There are too many loopholes, so I won't go into them. In one sentence, I hope the author can omit less when writing his next work.

Very nice,

Anticlimactic! Done hastily! No, nothing happened!

Neither fish nor fowl