A Good Start for the Family

Except for the somewhat unsatisfactory results, everything else is pretty good. The sentences are fluent and there are not many typos. You can give it a try.

This book is so poorly written, anticlimactic. Except for the romantic plot at the beginning, the rest of the chapter is either about fighting or complaining to adults. I really don't know. Such a powerful male protagonist doesn't understand anything about romance. He might as well just buy a piece of tofu and get killed.

It's not good to read, but I still endured it and finished reading it. The writing is messy and the ending is unfinished.

The plot is a bit complicated, but the rest is okay...