Shenwu Supreme

What a mess this is written, I can't stand it after reading about 200 chapters, it's disgusting!

The article should be pretty well written, but there are many problems: for example, before the male protagonist gathers his breath and attacks the enemy, he must say something to reveal his existence or ridicule the opponent, which is obviously inconsistent with common sense; in addition, in the big world of Xuanhuang, it is clear that the barbarians want to subvert the human race, but the male protagonist pities the barbarians who enter the temple, and is weak and weak. It is definitely because he does not know the general situation and lacks the temperament of a strong man to kill. There are many similar situations; in the Zhou Dynasty, all you need to buy things is Pure Yuan Dan (and it is not easy to obtain) and golden tickets. When you go to the big world to buy things, you have to use spiritual veins as a unit. It is really exaggerated; during the experience of the following worlds, The male protagonist's relatives and friends only need to hide indoors and practice to continuously upgrade. There is no need for experience to lay a solid foundation, and these relatives and friends will almost never die unexpectedly. Also, when the male protagonist wants to take revenge or save others, Quanquan always ignores his own strength and almost does whatever he wants. The process is straightforward. However, people must have adventures; I am very surprised that after leaving the Xuanhuang world, the male protagonist designated the top floor of the temple as his home. As a result, he later moved his relatives, friends, spiritual beasts, contractors, enemies, etc. To the top floor. Even water pools, spiritual veins, etc. Were randomly packed. Don't they need partitions? The temple space on each floor is hundreds of miles in radius, including the original mountains, etc. How is it packed? Is it enough? Finally, every time I describe distance, I always use meters, and time often uses seconds, which feels too weird. After killing enemies in the next few big worlds, are the space rings used to collect personal belongings almost all gone? There are some differences between Zero and Zero, but overall it is still a good work worth watching.

Accepted, Lin Yue'er's existence is dispensable

Not to mention anything else about fantasy novels, it's just that the author really fools the readers! There are easily millions of pills available! It seems to be faster than the flood!

There's so much nonsense

I can't stand it for more than 30 chapters. There are so many heavenly materials and earthly treasures that I can't even reach a small level. . . . . . . . . . . . . Not good-looking,. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Momojiji is really invincible just to make up the word count.

The article contains too much nonsense and I am not even interested in reading it.

I saw that in Chapter 2095, others wanted to kill the protagonist twice. Every time the others couldn't beat the protagonist, they apologized to the protagonist. After apologizing, everything was fine. The protagonist didn't kill anyone else. The garbage didn't look good.

This is a minor problem with this book. A woman joins forces with other people to hunt down Pig's Foot. She has a vicious personality. Pig's Foot saves her because she is a woman, and then the woman's character suddenly becomes clean. It's easy to change a person's nature but hard to change. A vicious person suddenly becomes kind. There is no foreshadowing and he and Pig's Foot bury the hatchet. There is no logic at all. Such a disgusting plot really makes me sick.