Honey Oolong

The writing is too long-winded, and it feels like the number of words has been crammed into it by including a lot of irrelevant things. The emotional development of the protagonist is okay, but cramming in the number of words kind of ruins the interest of reading.

The early stage is very sweet, before Chapter 270, the plot is quite good, but I can only say that it starts high and goes low, but it is still okay. Sweet little article. Why don't the author review it after he's finished writing? There are so many typos. There are also a lot of stories with a lot of words in the middle. The plot is a bit delayed, and the words are also wrong. To sum up, the sugar cane novel is very sweet in the first bite, and the more you go on, the more you get.

It's really good to read. It took me two days to read the nearly 500 chapters. I couldn't put it down at all. It was sweet throughout and not abusive. There was no cliche plot. I really fell in love with it. There has never been a book that appealed to my taste so well. It captured all my interests in reading. I really liked it.

It's long-winded, watery, has no common sense, and the writing is mediocre. I really couldn't bear it if I was not allowed to keep pets during pregnancy, so I gave up. . . Earlier, there was the one who helped the fourth child chase the little fairy. They were all selfish characters. The little fairy obviously had her own high platform and had to be pulled down by others, right? She also said that she supported women's high-sounding status, and turning her head was like being dragged into the world. . . . Really speechless. . .

It's so long-winded, are you writing a running account, and I feel so daddy...

How should I put it? It feels like the author wants to reflect the protagonist's outlook and knowledge too much. Very wordy

The writing is good, but I feel that the educational meaning is a bit too strong, with various views and teachings on how to behave.

I've reached about 150 chapters and can't read anymore. It's suitable for listening to books and can be understood even if you don't read it carefully. The plot is like a running account. I can write dozens of chapters if I go to an amusement park. I'm very daddy. I keep talking about great things. The male protagonist is praised to the sky. In the female protagonist's heart, the male protagonist is her god. The author must be completely misogynistic.

I came here after watching the advertisements, so I didn't see much. The ordinary life is also very good, with details, but too much emphasis is placed on how handsome and charming the male protagonist is, and the female protagonist has a good outlook on life. I feel that the author can write a fresh and fresh style, but come on. Maybe I have read too much.

I started high and low, I didn't want to watch it halfway through, the plot was getting more and more illogical, and there were a lot of typos. Don't tell the story too obviously, just two or three chapters at a time. And why does it feel more and more like spoiled wife literature later on? I can't stand it. The reaction of passers-by can be written paragraph by paragraph for several pages, and the side expression is not such a way of expression, right?