A Grumpy Little Mermaid Dressed as an Intergalactic God of War

I recommend everyone to read it, this book is really good✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but it got worse as the writing went on. The ending was so casual that I didn't know what I was looking at. . .

The first part is pretty good, but the second part is very rushed. ❌1. Where did Mingzhu go when he built a sea palace? ❌2. In the introduction, there is no mention of kicking an entire mercenary group, wearing a vest to participate in the star draft, and beating up my fiancé. ❌3. The heroine has stayed in the sea palace for three months, but the hero is not in a hurry? And I didn't understand the following chapters. The White Moon Dynasty and the aliens are the final boss, right? Only a few chapters appeared, very typical unfinished building💩💔

The beginning is good, but the ending is too fast.

I like it, but the ending is a bit sloppy. But the plot is really exciting, it's my favorite type! ! ! !

No, she didn't finish filling the hole, and it ended so hastily. The male protagonist suddenly disappeared in the middle and late stages. Later, he said that he would explain to the female protagonist and the wedding was completed without any explanation. The female protagonist disappeared for three months. Is he really not worried at all? ? And isn't the heroine seeking revenge? What about revenge? ? ? I don't want to report it... Suddenly there is a world war to maintain interstellar peace... The plot behind it is so baffling. I can give you a 3.5🌟 In the front, and an overall 2.7🌟 In the back. To be honest, the heroine is not very good. At certain times, for example, she brought harm to the princess, although it was not her intention, but she did not care at all. The latter part is very indifferent. The princess did not do anything bad to her, and then she has a fiancé. I had an affair with my apprentice, knowing that there was a girl who liked her, and my apprentice was very proud of it and provoked her in front of her. It was a bit difficult to criticize. I felt that this book was suitable for a harem, because there were several men in it who seemed to be alternate male protagonists, and the male protagonists didn't have many roles. The rest of the story was very perfunctory. As for the evil god, I thought I was going to write about him and the female protagonist, but it turned out that the evil god seemed to be trying to make up for the word count. It was inexplicable. I felt that it would be okay not to write it? There is no plot. All in all, the framework of the novel is good but the writing is too sloppy and a bit wasteful.

The front is quite sweet, but the back is even better! !

What I saw earlier was very good, and there were many places that I felt were very exciting. ~(￣▽￣~)~ When it was finished, I felt that it was a bit too sloppy. There were many holes buried in the front that were not filled in. ☹️, ٩( 'ω' )و, But the overall feeling was still very good and worth watching. (๑°3°๑)

Well... The ending is a bit sloppy

So sloppy in the back