The Fat Girl from Nongmen Will Farm

The story is quite complete and the plot is okay and exciting, but the author's description of the heroine's space is exaggerated, unrealistic and impractical. The first half of the story is okay, but the latter part is wordy. Moreover, there are a lot of unreasonable things in the article, such as the incident between Lin Rumeng and Liu Fourth Uncle. Anyone with a discerning eye can see the character of Zhou and Lin Rumeng. I don't know what is the reason for the brain problem. The family members do not stop or advise, but Liu Fourth Uncle is allowed to like Lin Rumeng, a person with good character, and there are some things about the heroine. I see through it but don't stop it. It's frustrating to watch. I don't like this kind of artificial approach. There are too many typos in the article and the names are always wrong. I hope the author can be more rigorous and conceive the article in a realistic way and not be too exaggerated. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and write more and better articles.

It looks good, but there are a few typos, and it feels a little delayed at the end, but it's still acceptable and looks good.