After Farming, I Embarked on the Road to Wealth

The theme of the story is not bad, but I feel that the author has seriously strayed from the topic, and the article itself is short and contains a lot of miscellaneous content. The theme is not outstanding, and the author's introduction to the main characters is not reasonable. For example, Su Mo read more than 20 chapters before he knew that the child was five years old, and the heroine also read many chapters before showing that he knew some Sanda before, and the author also has a lot of things to say. The arrangement is unreasonable. For example, the heroine's strength is a bit too great. Tigers and bears can lift hundreds of kilograms. Also, the heroine's space is not used well. There are obviously so many seeds in the laboratory, but they do not develop agriculture. Instead, they run some things that they have no time to take care of, such as barbecue shops and pickling. Things that should be done in the heroine's free time after she has achieved certain results in agriculture. In addition, the winery itself does not have enough wheat food to eat, and it still makes wine. Moreover, the heroine does not have much land and the grain output is low. This is very unreasonable. There are many unreasonable places. I feel that this is a problem with the author's conception. Furthermore, the character of the heroine is not suitable for his research. This profession is not suitable. The heroine's form is not very cerebral, and as a rice researcher, he should be a brain worker, so the author still has many loopholes in the conception of the article. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and write more and better works in the future.

It's pretty good, but the writing at the end is too concise.