The Daughter of a Farmer Comes to Farm

The story is relatively complete, but because it is short and involves a lot of content, I feel that the theme center is not specific, and the space does not play a big role. For example, I went to Qingshan Town before completing the construction of collecting wild vegetables and herbs in a small mountain village. There are also relatively few descriptions of the plot. I personally feel that if the heroine mainly completes various tasks in a small mountain village, leads the whole family and villagers to get rich together, and then moves to the cloud capital and the back of Kyoto, she can briefly write about it. This way, it feels like the space, the role is greater, and the positive energy of unity is stronger. Moreover, there are some characters in the article, and I feel that there is no need to use so much space to introduce them. So I hope the author can strengthen his writing and write more and better works.