My Nine Wicked Disciples Want to Usurp Me Every Day

The first 1/3 felt pretty good and a bit novel, but then the plot of helping several apprentices find the divine sword was somewhat repetitive and boring, and the ending was very sloppy, very, very sloppy, extremely sloppy, and it was no different from a bad ending. The overall writing style feels rather jerky, and the characters are basically created, but they are not vivid or full or three-dimensional. It is more about the description of the characters' appearance, lacking the description of the events and specific psychological activities. It is more like narrating things, especially in the later period, it is like keeping a running account. The overall idea of ​​the article is good.

This book is very nice

At the beginning, I thought it was okay, but later I found that the author's writing was relatively inexperienced. I felt that the author was like a novice, with some unclear sentences and some typos. However, I hope that the author can write better and better. 😄

The novel is overall quite good, but there are a lot of typos and sentences are often missing words.

Pretty good

Very, very beautiful, I think!

Shi has nothing to say

His sentences don't make sense, there are a lot of typos, and the last 2/3 of the content is not very interesting.