After Reading the Book, He Criticized the Male Protagonist for His Wrong Style of Painting

It is in the middle between a heroine and a female rival. The villain is too stereotyped, there are a lot of typos, and the backstabbing of the "decent" character is expected. What makes me laugh more is the ordinary people and low-level immortal cultivators who died in the blood demon formation at the end. Sure enough, the life of cannon fodder is not life. The Chonghua Immortal Tree probably still hates the common people. I'm not asking for a happy ending, but it's just that this kind of description of sacrificing ordinary people's lives is really difficult. It would be better to just write about weak immortal cultivators who die and return their immortal energy. Mortals in fairy tales are like meat on chopping blocks. It is really pitiful to have to sacrifice their lives for fantasy monsters.

The plot is bland, the writing style is average, and it's relatively new. This article is not so much about introducing a vicious female protagonist through the book, but it is more about swapping the identities of the vicious female protagonist and the original heroine. The original heroine becomes a vicious heroine, and the current heroine becomes an innocent and unpretentious heroine. It's quite strange. The big devil who has a lot of experience and has experienced a lifetime turns into an innocent young man when he meets the heroine. Even the contracted beasts are slandering the original heroine. The writing is too superficial.

It's worth watching. The logic is basically self-consistent. There is no digging holes or filling them in. It's a bit sweet without being tortured throughout. Well, it looks good.

You really have to keep reading this book. To be honest, when I read the first part, I really didn't like the heroine's character, but I was considerate and felt that she was too frustrated. Later on, I found out that the heroine was deliberately hiding her clumsiness. In the world of immortality, strength is king. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is another way to survive. The male protagonist fell in too fast, but the emotional pull between the male and female protagonists was so sweet to me. Although the appearance of the Nine Heavens Black Phoenix has no big effect, the whole book is still readable.

It's a story with a female protagonist. The male protagonist is almost useless, but he's a little sweet. He's paranoid. He's quite normal. The female protagonist also has positive views. What can I say about the original heroine? She seems a bit stupid. The final ending is like that, with no merit and no fault. Generally speaking, it's okay.

I think it's very interesting, and the more you go to the end, the more exciting it becomes. Ji Xiangsi's identity in the end really shocked me... What makes me feel the most distressed is Ouyang Weng, who never let Xiangsi know his feelings until his death, woo woo. The plot of this article is not procrastinating, it is compact, and it is very exciting to watch. The pace is quite fast, especially the ending.

The plot is average and the writing is average.

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The writing is childish and the style is like a lyrical composition. There were too many typos, and in most cases the sentences were not fluent, so I skimmed through them quickly. Both the male and female protagonists time-travel, the female protagonist time-travels into the female partner, and the male protagonist (indigenous) time-travels (seizes the body) into the original male protagonist.