My Yandere, Wicked Disciple Keeps Trying to Bully His Master

The content description is very exciting The author's writing is really good Although I haven't finished reading it yet

I thought this book was like the old plot of other books, but it turned out to be an eye-opener for me. The front part is very beautiful, but in the back there is a male protagonist from another world, but they are the same person. Afterwards, I was heartbroken and burst into tears when I was tortured. Later, the male protagonist of that world sacrificed himself, and then let the original male protagonist possess his body and seize his body. Then in the end, the original male protagonist and the original female protagonist were together, but the other male protagonist died. I hope he can see his sun in the next life.

It might not be very interesting for a while in the middle, but the back and front are pretty good to watch. I think Mo Qingci in another world is really miserable. His life is cold and lonely, and the only sun he meets does not belong to him, but he is willing to give everything he has to his sun, even if the price is death.

It looks good, but there are too many typos, some of which are not even easy to pronounce.

I feel that the author writes about the world of cultivating immortals in a very weird way. The female protagonist seems like a waste. She is always beaten to death by the male protagonist with such a high level of cultivation. There seems to be something wrong with her. The writing is just like ordinary ancient sayings. It is not a novel about cultivating immortals at all. And the outlook on life is a bit abnormal.

The male protagonist never harmed the female protagonist from beginning to end. Always being precise She must be a sharp-tongued person, otherwise how could she secretly help me without letting me know about me? It's fake, how could it be her. She only has eyes for her good apprentice. I am nothing but because she thinks I am funny and makes me interesting She's still worried about me, she doesn't hate me that much Why humiliate me, why don't you give me a trace of tenderness? Why did you save me from fire and water and abandon me with dust? Why am I so humble and flattering, not daring to show a trace of my own unworthiness. No matter how much I do, I can't compare to him? This has always been the process I want the flower of the high mountain to come down from the altar, I want to cover her up. I want to see him beg me, rely on me and be protected by me I want to ask her why no matter what she does, she will kill her in her eyes. I thought it was pretty good in the beginning, but after chapter 60 I felt it was a bit stale.

I really feel that the female protagonist in the middle period is like a waste. She is obviously better than the male protagonist. And I really think Lin Yi is more suitable for the female protagonist. . .

Everything else is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos. The original male protagonist is quite miserable. I suggest adding a side ending with the original male protagonist.

I have never seen such a twisted novel. There are so many typos that it affects the reading. There are also problems with the logic. It is obvious that a cheating mind-reading novel can create more serious conflicts than if it had no words. The male protagonist is really miserable and has been abused. The female protagonist is really cruel and is good to everyone. She does the most hurtful things to the male protagonist with the most innocent and aggrieved look. The so-called HE is not that the male protagonist gets what he wants but that the female protagonist is favored.

His last sight was of his sun. But, in the next life, will this solar energy find him, the real him? He is willing to wait, no matter what he will experience... Woohoo, I feel sorry for the other person in this world