Welcome to Hell Bus

It's pretty good-looking, with two female protagonists. The front part is pretty good, but I feel like it's a bit broken in the back part. I don't understand it when I see 88% of them forcibly taking off other people's clothes, and she forcibly takes off their clothes to image the whole task. I think the analysis is wrong, and then she becomes cold-hearted and cold-blooded. I really don't understand it and I don't want to watch it. But after seeing this, I think it's okay so I'll give it a good review.

It's really good-looking. It has two female protagonists. It's very disappointing that there is no male protagonist! ! ! The two heroines complement each other in every aspect, and they are not holy in their treatment of others. Those who have done evil to them will also fight back. The plot of the dungeon is almost complete. There is no feeling that the complete plot is not clear at the end of the dungeon. I don't understand why so few people watch it ╰(⇀‸↼)╯ But the ending is really rushed. I regret not seeing it sooner. Give the author more support and let his heart slowly break into glass dT-Tb But it's still very interesting and I love it. It's also one of the rare books that I can see the ending of. I'm looking forward to the next one! ! ! ! !ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

The previous one is quite interesting. The two female protagonists are not virgins and have complementary personalities. They must avenge themselves and they are not merciful. It is just a bit unfinished. The author feels that it is already very good for the first time. I am looking forward to the next book.

I am here to give the author another hard blow to his glass heart. Let's talk about the advantages first. The beginning is okay, the subject matter is also good, there is no CP, the two heroines' IQs have not dropped from the beginning to the end, and most of the stories are interesting. The shortcomings, to be honest, are quite a few. First of all, the writing style is very average... There are many shortcomings in the choice of words, sentences, environment, description of story details, and the writing style of a primary school student. If I didn't want to see the ending, I really... Couldn't read... Secondly, regarding the portrayal of women, I don't know if anyone has discovered that except for the two heroines, 99% of the other female characters in the whole story have major problems. They are either malicious for no reason, jealous for no reason (so jealous that they want to kill the heroines and then quickly), or they are love-minded, or they are short-sighted and cannot see normal women. I don't know if I'm too sensitive or the author's biased portrayal? It's just weird. Again, crappy! The bad guys are all confused, that's it? ? ? I read it carefully and commented very carefully. I hope everyone can discuss it rationally~

It's not bad. The story with two heroines is just a little short.

It's quite satisfactory, there is no innovation in the copy, and it's a little slow. But it's still good to watch when you're relaxing. The two heroines are quite likable. The only dissatisfaction is that there are too many stereotypes about women.

I only finished one copy and couldn't stand it anymore. First, a lot of typos. I think this should not exist for a writer. Errors such as the names of characters and other words should be discovered during the proofreading process. However, there are too many such errors in the first copy of this book, which gives a very poor impression. Secondly, the character creation and plot advancement are somewhat baffling. In the first copy, a very unintelligent female character was created, and it was said that the two heroines did not like her. But towards the end of the first copy, another stupid male character who was successfully accepted by the two heroines was highlighted. I don't understand why it is shaped like this. It makes no sense. Men and women are stupid, so why not accept women but accept men? It's even more inexplicable in terms of plot advancement

It sucked at the end, but it was okay at the beginning, but it sucked. I might as well have left earlier as I wrote earlier. Wouldn't this be very disrespectful to me who saw the end? And it was recommended by the system. The search was for high scores. The result is that it is unfinished, unfinished, unfinished, unfinished, but the first part is really okay, and it is still a double heroine. I can barely call it an average. It is unfinished, unfinished, unfinished, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Every plot is exciting and has a strong sense of immersion. The heroine has a very good and smart personality, and the others don't hold back. It's very enjoyable to watch. You can tell that the author's writing style is great.

I don't know what happened next, but after reading the first story, I felt that it was scary and scary. The narrative was average, and it was very bland and flowing. There was no point that attracted me to continue reading.