Siheyuan: Start as a Level 6 Lathe, Eat Meat Every Time

Bad writing, no connection between top and bottom! For example, if you speak to help others solve a problem, the next part is that others smell the masculinity in you! Isn't this nonsense? If you say that you hugged her and she smelled your manly scent, that's normal. Also, when you took your girlfriend to watch a movie, you only said that after the movie was over, the next part was about how you were doing alone, and you didn't even mention that you sent your girlfriend home! Too bad

There is a chapter in which Silly Zhu goes to jail and her sister's engagement is annulled. The protagonist also says that Silly Zhu's sister worked for a year and didn't get any money back, so why don't you think about what she will eat when she gets the money back. I'm skinny and hungry at home but at least I can eat enough and give the money back to the widow.

When writing chronology, at least it must be in line with that era, and you can't write it randomly. Is a household with five guarantees equal to a whole family of loyal men and women? What are the families of martyrs, and what are the lonely elderly people? There is a thatched house in the courtyard. Do you think the courtyard in the 1960s is the villa today? Just writing blindly

Qimao's courtyard novels all lack the masculinity of men. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, he is still a loser in the courtyard. His parents are abusive, his wife is bullied, and the protagonist gets angry for a while, and then nothing happens. . . Either the extreme stretch is 1000 chapters, or the Holy Mother is 1000 chapters, which will make people feel sad.

You gave the old lady some face, and the thief said you were an enemy agent? Why are you so proud?

It's outrageous. Let's not talk about the age issue. It is different from the film and television. Qin Huairu calls the protagonist brother? How old is Qin Huairu? How old is the protagonist? Then there's the issue of betrothal gifts. I've seen the movie Wreaths Under the Mountain, which was about the Vietnam Counter-War. It was in the 1980s, and the pension for a company-level cadre was only 500 yuan. In the 1960s, you only received 500 yuan for a betrothal gift? Author, you didn't write a book blindly with your eyes closed. You should at least understand the prices.

The crimes committed become more serious and the punishments received become smaller. Author, is Jia Zhang your biological mother? Is Banggeng your biological grandson? If you write it this way, I can only wish your mother and future generations nothing better.

If you have tried poison, you can read it in Shuhuang. The timeline is unclear, and some plots and plots cost hundreds of dollars at a time. The female protagonist has no brains and does not make progress, and her appearance rate is only a few times. The male protagonist is often lack of brains.

A systematic time traveler would be too cowardly to live.

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