The Monster Comes Down the Mountain, My Wife and Senior Sister Dote on Me Too Much

Nice

The front part is okay, but the further you go to the back, the more confusing it becomes, and you don't even understand what is written.

It looked okay from the front, but when I got to the back, I lost all his confidante, and there was only one Qin Ziyue. I didn't fill in many pitfalls and just took him through.

The first part was okay, at least it centered on the kindness of the master's wife and senior sister to her, but by the end, all five of the master's wives were dead. Then where did all his wives go? In the end, there is only Qin Ziyue and the fifth love scene left. The most curious thing is the person and name in it. The correspondence of the plot is like scribbling 100 words there, and there are 80 words in it, all of which are typos. I have a hard time reading it. I can think that the front part is written by a real person, but the back part is purely human-machine, and then there is the description of the father and mother of the protagonist. I think it can be more mysterious. His father's appearance later on is a little foreshadowing for his father, or his strength, but it is not described at all.

How many heroines are there? Send me their names

What a mess, with typos and missing people.

There's no point in making things up.

It's always been the case, gasp 😅

The content is okay, but there are a lot of typos, and the updates are really slow.