HP: About the Fact That I Returned to My Parent Generation

I have read a lot of HP fanfics, but the setting of this one is really attractive. The heroine pretends to be serious on her face, but in fact she is complaining like crazy in her heart. When I still wanted to complain, the heroine herself complained, and the author will also explain the details. I love it so much, the most important thing. What's great is that finally there is someone who doesn't want to be a black snake or a black lion, and they don't engage in female competition. I'm a goddess. When I was reading a book, I wanted someone to give Albus those socks. The heroine did this. The heroine really loves her family, but it's a bit unreadable. Please update it soon.

It's really beautiful, I really like this kind of strong heroine! I have read a lot of articles about personal trainers, and most of them meet Sri Lankan teacher before Lily, and become Sri Lankan teacher's salvation in Lily's place. But this book is different. The heroine got to know Si Jiao later. When she met the professor, he was already dead, and later she returned to her family. At first, she just wanted to repay her kindness, protect Si Jiao, and regard him as her teacher. The relationship slowly deteriorated as they got along. Si Jiao could tell her and Lily from the beginning. Si Jiao treated the heroine differently from the beginning, and the heroine also treated the private tutor differently from the beginning. In the two-way love, one didn't realize it, and the other didn't dare to talk about it, and would only get sulky. But I like Regulus so much, my dear, do you really not consider changing to a male protagonist? Regulus, he really makes me cry to death, he is so good, compared to Lily who walks into people's hearts like a breeze, the female protagonist is like the sun, breaking into everyone's world forcefully. Her warmth shines on everyone. (Very much updated! When will they be able to get together? Then you really can't change the male protagonist, how about you write another Rael's book?)

Overall, it's actually pretty good. The heroine was going to Hogwarts, but for some reason she suddenly woke up and was transported to her own generation. The heroine is a bit like a little sun in there. She warms a lot of people, and she is very sincere to her friends. The heroine is very strong (I personally think she is a bit ridiculously strong). Personally, I feel that the author's writing pace is a bit fast and the emotional lines are not delicate enough. However, the author will explain it very clearly and check it carefully, which is great! As for the male protagonist, I was actually a little bit dissatisfied with the pairing of Severus and the female protagonist. But when I finished reading Rael's confession, I instantly climbed over the wall. I'm sorry. << I hope you can cheer up

Apologize first, I'm sorry. The plot is still great, there is no particularly serious OCC, and the character changes are basically traceable. Then what I don't like very much is, ① Why must there be multiple affectionate male supporting characters for the heroine! Why can't it be one-on-one? There must be twists and turns and difficulties for the male and female protagonists. I can't even figure out who the male protagonist is. Looking at it, I almost thought it was all-inclusive. I really don't like all types, if so then I apologize. ②The heroine is almost always surrounded by men, almost all boys! The heroine has a girl friend, is the girl friend going to die? Maybe it's because the heroines I watched before were all with female friends, so I'm not used to it (I'm a bit harsh, I'm sorry) ③The heroine's sense of proportion is so low! There is almost no... Oh my God, there is no relationship between her and the male protagonist. I understand why there is no relationship between her and all the boys (I really broke down). There may be a reason why she came back from the future, but it seems so divisive. The heroine has learned the habits of aristocrats but does not have the feeling of aristocrats. That real aristocratic lady has no sense of proportion! Especially the attitude towards Sirius, I really don't understand Sorry, sorry, sorry, I may have spoken too harshly, so I apologize first. This is just my personal opinion, I may have some misunderstandings. Don't scold me, please, please. Maybe I'm picky, so I can't accept it... I've abandoned the article. If you reply to me, I probably won't reply. Sorry, sorry, personal opinion.

It's really good-looking, but can I still see updates from you during the author's lifetime? (999 Knees are omitted here)

Generally speaking, the idea is very novel, but I think there are some areas that can be improved. These are just small suggestions and you don't have to adopt them. 1. The heroine is very smart, she can even be called a "genius", and she has a charming personality. But are foreign cultures so open? I remember that in both the original novel and the movie, there is no 14-year-old heroine like her. Well, she is very sexy (why do I sound like someone from the feudal Qing Dynasty when I say this) 😂 2. The heroine is young, after all, she is "only" 14 years old. But 14 years old, if you put it in the second or third year of junior high school, even if foreign concepts are different and think that kissing (passionate kissing) is a very "normal" thing, it can't be that early! Some are still (drunken version). In a nutshell: 9 (6 turned over). 3. The most important point, bar none! Readers, please be sure to read the introduction carefully, otherwise you may not know this is a Sri Lankan fanfic until the middle stage! 4. The heroine is innocent and childlike. OK, this character is very lovable, but we have to have a certain temper, right? No matter how childish or immature this is, it cannot be done like this! The overall plot is good, and the characters basically have some personal settings. Fortunately, it is within the acceptable range. The author will also share her description of the heroine's clothes and the source of inspiration. OK,

The first book on Qimao that I have read in its entirety. It was recommended by my roommate. It is not bad. I read it in one go. Every character written by the author has a very fitting personality. I really feel that Sirius should be just like how he was written. He can be defeated and saved.

I really love it, but I have so little stock that I have to find time to write it. I cry to death! ! ! ! !

Eve is indeed a lovable character, and this book has also changed the fate of many people: such as Regulus Black; Barty Crouch Jr.; Severus Snape. The emotions are also described very delicately. There are just a few small episodes that are not very good, such as Regulus's storyline and the fact that Sirius fell in love with the heroine at the beginning. The former is regretful, and the latter is speechless. I feel that the heroine's character is not the kind that Sirius likes, and in the original work, Sirius does not give people the impression of being a playboy. It should be because he was not enlightened when he was in school, or he did not meet the right person.

I feel a strong sense of redemption