Disciple, You're Too Invincible! Please, Just Come Down the Mountain!

It's not good-looking. The author doesn't know a lot of common sense. The protagonist also takes a taxi and eats a meal. This is a bad plot. There are many typos. There are no funny points and no humorous jokes. The reading experience is bad. I'm sorry!

The themes of the works are all good, and the character descriptions are also really straightforward. I will give it an excellent rating.

The author is very talented and his writing is brilliant. Thank you for your hard work!

For the first hundred chapters, I entered this novel out of curiosity about the subject, and I thought it would be okay to read for entertainment. But chapters 100 to 200 are really high-pressure and very discouraging. I wanted to read some mindless and refreshing articles to relax, but this part was not satisfying at all. It was just mindless and made people angry. Including but not limited to the protagonist who wants to create a silly character while plotting against him; while saying that the protagonist needs to muddy the waters of the world, and then constantly asking the protagonist to provoke opponents who cannot be beaten, and is constantly being abused; while repeatedly saying that facing the Lu family Such a behemoth with the Transformation Realm needs to quickly improve its strength, while not improving the protagonist's strength. From the beginning to the 200th chapter, the protagonist's strength has always been at the peak of the Heaven Realm, which has not been touched at all. Yes, after 200 chapters, several senior sisters have not found it. If you don't want to write about cultivation-related content, I think it would be better to write a superpower system. Everyone's strength is just a display of superpowers, so there is no need to consider the level of cultivation. It directly tests the use of superpowers and mutual restraint. Considering that the author may have written this part several years ago, and a year or two is an era in the novel world, I won't go too far and give it a general evaluation. If you don't care about the rigor of the plot setting at all, there's nothing wrong with watching this movie.

The protagonist sent someone else's father to jail. His son didn't even think about annihilating his family for the sake of justice. Hahaha, he later became friends with the protagonist. He even invited the protagonist to his house for dinner and even gave the protagonist his father's personal jade pendant. I don't know what the author wanted to express.

Well written! The language is fluent, the plot is exciting and interlocking, and it is well written.

The writing is pretty good

Very good

Pure headline, pure gimmick

Anyone who spreads hatred has nothing good to offer