After the Little One Comes Down from the Mountain, Every Big Shot Spoils Him Rotten

The content is very good, but I don't know why no one reads it. The author has worked hard to update it, but there are too many typos! The main character's name was also mixed up! Hope it can be corrected

It's really brainless. I gave up the book. For her own purposes, the heroine asked her father to beat her brother, and also asked the female ghost around her to possess her brother, just to achieve her own goals. Don't read it. It's fine in the front, but it's really brainless in the back.

The content is messy and illogical. Character name. Age is often confusing. There are so many typos. Don't look at it with your brain. It's okay to see the main character making people laugh.

Beautifully written. It would be better if we add some extras. I wanted to cry when I saw it at the end. If the author had written it better, I might have cried even more. Good

The first part is pretty good, don't worry about the details, but after the fake mother appears, everyone's IQ is crushed. Can't the heroine, the little Taoist, see it? Even if you can't tell if you are a relative, can you easily believe it? After being reborn, my mind was also pushed back to childhood? Every one of them has become mentally retarded. The fake mother's boring destructiveness is not as good as the previous girlfriends. Why are they all obedient like idiots? It's so stupid to be provoked by a few words.

From the first chapter to the tenth chapter, I really couldn't persevere. The motivation for perseverance was that the plot was more attractive. The reason why I couldn't persevere was that the sentences didn't make sense, typos were frequent, and the logic of my speech was as poor as that of a primary school student.

The writing is wonderful, but there are many typos, which are very misleading. I hope you will continue to work hard, come on!

The author himself wrote the names and titles of people in many places incorrectly🌚

I think it's okay. The only drawback is typos and the names of brothers are spelled incorrectly. Be careful and reduce typos, then it will be OK!

Although there are some minor issues with mistyping the names, this is really the first novel I read without jumping around bit by bit! Don't stop updating novels for lunch!