The Heavenly Master Came Down from the Mountain, and She Stood Guard on the Red and White Mat

The heroine is a Taoist priest who is dedicated to cultivating the way of heaven. She is forced to go down the mountain so that her identity cannot be revealed. She is also an abandoned young lady from a wealthy family. In order to survive, I set up a stall to tell fortunes, and encountered a series of strange things. There were Celestial Masters, spiritual groups, demons, ghosts, and strange things. The male protagonist did not have a strong sense of existence. The story about the heroine's career, welcome to enter~

How would I rate your book? It looks strange. You are still serializing it. I don't know what plans you have for the heroine's life story in the future, but I really want to complain about it. The hostess lives with her six brothers and sisters. She is involved in the business and entertainment circles, and everything is arranged for her family. It seems that you really want to give the heroine a good background, but this is not necessary. It's really very ancient and very Long Aotian's kind of overbearing president literature. The family has arranged everything for the heroine to be the best. First of all, you arranged for the heroine to be 16 years old. You are not that old yourself, but you used this supernatural and heavenly master theme as a novel to write. It is also commendable for your courage. The writing style and knowledge simply cannot support this kind of setting. Moreover, you have used inappropriate words many times in your article, and you just used them without even knowing the meaning of the word. The first point is that the heroine took the initiative to talk to Liu Chen, but Liu Chen said that he was amused by her social fear? ? ? ? ? ? Go to Baidu and find out for yourself what the meaning of social fear is, and then use this word to write articles! Secondly, who drinks red wine for breakfast? In order to highlight the coolness, there is really no need to go back to the 82-year-old Lafite. The third point is that judging from the heroine's first confrontation with Mr. Sang, your description is also very unsuccessful. The leader of a large group is still as happy and angry as a rich man, and he yells and slams the table. Just this idea to become the leader of a large group? He doesn't have any noble accomplishments or background, and he was made mad by the 16-year-old heroine after just a few words of exchange? ? It's outrageous.

Personally I think it looks great. The content is particularly exciting, and the characters are also good. The only thing I don't like is the description of the heroine's family: the psychological activities and the actual behavior are too contradictory... There are no other flaws in the entire process. I really like the heroine story.

He is always surprisingly patient with the mentally retarded, and can find the shining points of supporting roles in others' malice toward him. It made me sick and vomited

Since the aunt helped the heroine avoid the disaster, later the heroine said she wanted to help others, but they pretended not to hear, thinking that she was a child and couldn't do it. (The heroine is at least more capable than the Taoist priests over there. How old are those Taoist priests? How old is the heroine? If the heroine can compare with them, the heroine has the ability! The ability does not depend on age.) The supporting characters are seriously dumbed down! ! ! What kind of assistant to the president, how could he faint from fear when he saw something that he thought was unbelievable and impossible? ! (There is no frightening description of the female ghost in the article.) How did he become the assistant to the president with such a temperament? ! (How could someone like him succeed in helping the CEO and others?) The description of ghost hunting is not like a Taoist priest catching ghosts. It feels like a liar. It makes it look quite mysterious, but in fact it is not that mysterious (what I said here may be a bit confusing, I want to say that the description is not scary or scary. It is deliberately creating a funny atmosphere, but it is not funny at all!) How can I put it... The writing is average, and the plot is terrible. It is recommended to lose your mind when watching this, but even if you lose your mind, some plots are still a bit shocking.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I skipped to the end, and all my relatives became wise, which was not in line with the overlords and various awesome characters. The characters in it were relatively simple-minded, good and evil, and the demons had well-developed limbs and jumped around for a while. The ghosts added to the plot, which made it less embarrassing. Overall, there is no book in this book to read. There are not many male protagonists. Whether there is one or not, most of them are female protagonists who write the world, and the male protagonist's road to chasing his wife is slowly charted...

It's getting more and more frustrating. Can't Yunlai talk less and do more? You've been led by the nose all the time, and the bad guy has killed so many people, but you still give him a chance, a fucking chance? If he was caught and released unluckily, more people would be killed!

I can't get enough of it. The author will update it soon! Please! ! !

A true genius! The heroine is obviously a powerful heavenly master, but she still pretends that she is just standing guard on the red and white seats. The contrast is so funny. The plot is fast-paced, full of laughs, very relaxed and funny!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! The character design was very successful! I personally like it!