Demon-Slaying Blade

(Slight spoilers) The beginning is quite interesting and logical, but the twists and turns are hard to guess. It is a bit perfunctory at the end. I don't know if the author didn't want to write it or if he just can't fill it in. There is a lot of content that is not clearly written. It feels very rushed. I have many questions that are not resolved. For example, when Qing'er said "eye", where did Qing'er go after that? Why did Master bring Youmang back to Zhenshan? Also, the reason why the senior brother rebelled was written too lightly and was inexplicable. And the bet between the senior brother and the senior sister is a bit broken. Will the monster catcher really create monsters to harm people just for the bet? Also the Master's death was a bit rushed. Alas, the beginning is really good, but the later part is really confusing.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, the plot logic is clear and concise, the rhythm is not bad, and it's a bit Gulong's style, but the writing style is average, a large number of sentences lack elements, and the paragraphs are not good. Writing the novel as prose can relieve some of the power and create a relaxed aesthetic, but at the same time it is difficult to grasp the climax of the plot.

Generally speaking, it's okay to take a look, but there are quite a few problems. Most of them are not particularly serious, but people who care about them will feel like they are stuck in their throats, but it is a pity to abandon them. I think based on the setting of this book, if it is paired with a more mature writing level, it should be able to present a better work. The rhythm of the story was not well controlled. It has always been tepid, with no ups and downs, and no obvious main line. The ending is a bit sloppy and feels neither good nor bad. The relationship between the male and female protagonists started very quickly, it could be regarded as "love at second sight". If you have watched "Hangzhou County Magistrate" starring Wang Yan and Su Youpeng, the emotional line is like that of Ningxiang Hangtie Sheng. The TV series is enhanced by the beauty and acting skills of the actors, the atmosphere of the scenes, and BGM. The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops quickly and naturally. But when placed in a book, for someone like me who has relatively high logical requirements for emotional lines, it would feel a bit awkward. The female protagonist is somewhat familiar with the male protagonist, but there are no advantages or disadvantages to this, it is just a personality design, and it depends on personal preference. The plot is a bit scattered, maybe because too many small things like eating are inserted between the plots. Showing life can enrich the content and character image of the novel, but the life part is scattered and inserted between the various plot nodes of each case, which destroys the rhythm of the story and appears to be delayed and tepid. The preface written in some places does not match the postscript, and most of the time it is either incomprehensible or too jumpy. But they are all minor details and do not affect the main plot. It is just uncomfortable to read. The logic of the reasoning is not very strong. It is more like the author has figured out the plot, but has not thought about how to advance the plot, and then writes out all the plots he thought of, jumping directly from one plot to another, and directly throwing the setting in the reader's face. When I read more than 160 chapters, I really couldn't bear it anymore and wanted to give up the article, but I've reached this point. I didn't read the remaining 60 or 70 chapters. I felt uncomfortable, so I persisted and finished reading. There are some wonderful things later on, but the above problems still exist.