The Phoenix Order

I would like to suggest that you be more careful when proofreading the style of the book before publishing it? Be more rigorous? Too many typos

I gave up around Chapter 190. The first thing the heroine did after she was reborn was not to plan to kill the scumbag and Green Tea who had not yet grown up. Later, the maids who found the martial arts did not monitor the scumbag's movements. They knew that when the scumbag grew up, he would destroy his own country and kill his own family, and their attitude towards the scumbag was always laissez-faire. Also, after studying the Imperial Art for three years, I learned how to find a solution only when things are brought to my face. The master knew that the heroine was the turning point of the Night Kingdom but he refused to let her learn martial arts. A maid who knows how to use martial arts at a critical moment will never know what's around her. It feels like the heroine came back just to make up for the relationship between the male protagonist in the previous life, and the relationship between the two was very clumsy. (Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) Those who like to kill and decisively detour decisively

Can the author write some more side stories, as well as the following, the relationship with the male protagonist, and amnesia?

The heroine's mother didn't say anything. I really can't stand it.

It is worth reading. The original author used his own wisdom to defeat his enemies in the previous life. He did not use cheats and the content is not exaggerated. Read the entire novel!

It feels like the heroine hasn't done anything substantial since she was reborn, just falling in love. The pace is too slow and there is no content

In fact, the general plot is still very good, but the characters in the article are a bit confusing, and there are typos, but the impact is not big. I feel that there are still some people whose stories should not end here. Luo Shaoyuan later wrote that it should not end, and their stories are not over yet.

It's a very good read, the male and female protagonists have online IQs, and the storyline is compact. Apart from too many typos, it's still worth reading.