Building a Haunted House with a Staff of All Things Uncanny

Your writing style is really average. The subject matter is also quite good. If you write it well, it should be of a thrilling type and very attractive. Unfortunately, your writing style is really average. It is very simple and simple, and there is no idea of ​​​​bringing people into it. The heroine herself has done nothing. The people and things around her seem to be a magnet, and they have a magnetic force coming towards the heroine. Moreover, the heroine's golden finger is very open, but it's a pity that you described her as a bit dull and stupid. She has a golden finger but doesn't know how to make the most of it.

The material selection of this book is very novel. It is cut into a small world in the form of a haunted house and there are many reversals in it. The plot is full of ups and downs. The only shortcoming of this book may be that there are several scenes where the heroine is a bit stupid for an hour. Apart from this small shortcoming, I feel that this book is really good. I have read many types of books and this book can probably be ranked third!

It's gripping, I want to read it in one sitting. Collected

It doesn't look good and I feel that Ma Xiaoling's character has collapsed. At first, I felt that her character was mysterious and intelligent, as if she had a sense of calmness in the face of danger after many scripts. Later, it felt like her IQ had dropped. The heroine became calm and unhurried. She began to become timid and fearful, and was a bit speechless. , And the heroine has opened a lot of stories, but I feel like she is still a waste. The more I read, the more boring I am. The title of the book does not match the content. It talks about opening a haunted house, but I have been reading horror scripts and opening a weird haunted house. Do you mind changing the name? I can survive in the infinite stream to the extreme. I am speechless.

The subject matter is quite novel and the writing is good, but I don't really like the character setting. She is a little girl with a not-so-good man living inside her body. The other thing is that there are too many cheats. The protagonist is too ordinary.

Gaga Gaga is beautiful, Super Invincible is beautiful, the author's logic is very good, but I can't get around it, but I can understand it all at once later on, it's so cool! It's also a bit scary. I recommend everyone to watch it. I won't spoil it for the family.

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Too many twists and turns. In the finale.

The plot is very good, full of ups and downs, not mediocre. It is the best article I have read in recent times. Seven Cats also gave me a big surprise. I read the whole article carefully. However, the writing style is as good as that of ordinary college students as mentioned in the comment area. It is not beautiful and does not describe the protagonist and supporting characters very well. There is no sense of substitution. I don't mind the writing style. I personally endured the writing and read it for the plot. There are many twists and turns in the later stage. It is recommended that if you can't stand it in the early stage, you can directly read the later stage.

The heroine is so stupidly written