Horror Game: Infinite Trick Coins at the Start!

There are a lot of typos, and the plot is a mess. The protagonist's IQ is like garbage. You're wasting time on a small character. You can kill him in the early stage. You have to fatten up and let him sneak attack on you. S coins.

The plot design is not good enough and there are a lot of loopholes

Not to mention anything else, it is just a novel composed of several stories. I like it very much. It is also logical. I thought Yang Xue would be forgotten by the author. I didn't expect that I was not moved. I am still reading. I hope it will be better in the future. Of course, I will not criticize if it is bad, because I feel that everyone who writes novels with tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of words is super invincible.

Even after being reborn, he still looks like a novice

It feels a bit high and low. There are several European medieval settings and only a few adjectives. I think the setting is quite interesting, but consider that the novel also has female readers. Don't keep being clever and making dirty jokes in your articles. (It's useless to scold me)

Everything else is fine, except raising Zuo Hao in the early stage is a big poisonous point. People who have already broken up with each other will not solve it. They insist on raising him. It is called revenge in this way, but in the eyes of readers, this kind of behavior is only childish, extremely childish, childish in making fun of one's own life. It's just a matter of taking one's own temper with some small things. Keeping someone who can attack you at any time is not called playing with one's temper. It is really stupid.

The protagonist doesn't kill enemies when he encounters them, just waiting for the New Year?

If you don't kill a little villain in the first place, why do you have to hang out with a bunch of them?

If you buy the props, you have to find your own enemies. If you don't kill them early, you can save them for laying eggs.

Knowing the enemy, but still thinking that the enemy is too weak to be killed will not satisfy the hatred, and wait for the enemy to grow up before killing, a typical villain mentality. Wait for the opponent to grow up and kill you directly. This novel can be renamed, it's called [The protagonist is reborn, lets the villain grow up, and is killed in reverse]