After Prison, I Married a Comatose Tycoon on a Whim

The heroine has a lot of vests, haha, the plot is pretty good, and being slapped in the face is a lot more fun, but when will she know that the child is hers, hurry, hurry, hurry!

Nice! The part where the heroine takes off her waistcoat is very cool, and it really shows off the heroine's personal charm! The heroine's life after being released from prison was not completely smooth sailing. She had to face doubts and pressure from the outside world, as well as deal with her own inner struggles and conflicts. However, in the process, she gradually found her own direction and goals, and became fully grown!

After reading Chapter 183, I would like to share my thoughts after watching it. The heroine: After five years in prison, it is not a prison sentence, but a further study. The characters before entering were not elaborated too much. Anyway, after coming out, they are all kinds of awesome, design bosses, A master of traditional Chinese medicine is an awesome apprentice, and his martial arts value is also very high. While he was in prison, his best friend even fed him. Let's just say, he is so powerful, why didn't he take good care of his two children, and was teased to death? After he was released from prison, he was teased to celebrate. Male Protagonist: When you meet a child who looks exactly like your own son, don't you become suspicious? The child turned around and disappeared. Aren't you worried? Didn't you investigate if you were poisoned? The son was beaten and beaten out of the family, why don't you consider sending him back? I rescued an old man on the road. Good guy, the old man came up to me with a lifeless expression and asked me to be my daughter-in-law. If I can't do it, I will accept my daughter as my daughter. It's not over yet. On the day of my marriage, my dear, the old man will give me shares, and my godbrother will give me shares. This is because I know that the heroine has a halo👑. Can I stop it in advance? You can read the novel without thinking, but when the characters are written so straightforwardly and become such idiots, I still can't stand it.

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant.

It looks great. Can the author quickly expose the truth that Lin Bailianhua is not the biological mother of the heroine's child? Hurry up and slap her in the face.

It's so boring, I still don't know the child is my own

The writing is too messy. It is obvious that modern articles sometimes write about Yaogu and other times about Yangcao. The first few chapters are really written carefully, but the later chapters are simply pieced together, as if they were generated by AI. Moreover, the author has messed up the names of many characters. Characters who have not yet appeared are suddenly written in a string. Chapter 1 I once felt that reading a novel is a burden. The setting is very good, but it is really a pity. The author's writing is a mess, and the writing style is not very good. There is no personal charm of the characters at all. The psychological activities are not written, and the background of important events is not written. It is all in vernacular. It gives me a feeling of powerlessness as if I were reading a primary school student's composition.

The plot is long-winded and confusing. It has hundreds of chapters. The child is having sex with her two sons, but the heroine still doesn't know.

As long as I take a bath, I won't write more than 400 pictures and still don't recognize him.

Nice!