Love After a Flash Marriage: I Inherited a Billion-Dollar Fortune the Day We Registered

The writing style is too poor, it is too long-winded, as if it were a running account, there are many typos, the knowledge is too narrow, and the level of education is not enough.

Not bad, I like it.

There are too many dialogues in the whole text, the writing is extremely verbose, and there is very little effective content! The author's writing is so poor.

There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, but... Except for the main characters, the supporting characters are almost all written with one character. It is really uncomfortable to watch. There are also a lot of typos. If it is just a word with a wrong pronunciation, then it is fine. Some of the mistakes are because I don't know what is written!

There are too many typos, and the words written in the front and the back don't match up.

The story is good, but there are too many characters in the book who cannot understand human speech. The scene of the breakup has been repeated 5 or 6 times, but you can still feel that the other party is not serious about praising their children and their girlfriends. Every time I see these procrastinating and inconsistent plots, I feel irritated to death.