Urban Cultivation of Immortal Emperor Invincible

To practice Qi and advance to foundation building, you have to go through thunder tribulation, but what about the golden elixir and Yuanying? During the Qi training period, I use the best spiritual stones at the beginning, and then use the fairy stones later? Whenever you have something, you should tell others. Aren't you afraid that the souls of those who know will be searched by others? Can the protagonist write the word caution? It's ridiculous to say that this kind of character can reach the top of the world of immortality!

The story is okay, the description is too wordy, there are too many adjectives, and it is repeated several times. Skip 10 pages before reading again, or scroll through and read twenty lines at a time. Several words are repeated.

The plot is quite down-to-earth and reasonable, and there are endless exciting stories. I highly recommend it.

Another day, very well written

The author used the word "seem" too much and it got a bit annoying. Next, let's remove the word "seem" and use less of it.

I just feel like I can't stand it

This is for fear that others will not know that the protagonist is an immortal cultivator.

The plot is dull and boring, just like a running account. He talks about cultivating immortals all day long, and tells the identity of the cultivators whenever they meet casually without checking or testing them!

It's boring. I have to add names every time. "Ye Chen", "Yan Ran", "Ye Chen" and "Yan Ran" make me very irritated and give up.

It wasn't written by Ren at all.