After the Xuanmen Boss Returned, the Whole Family Knelt Down and Begged for Forgiveness.

I have read more than 100 chapters and want to comment. This article seems to be about a real and fake daughter. In fact, there is not much entanglement with the original family. The first step is to cut off the relationship. The scumbag brothers from the original family will come out from time to time to make things difficult, and then be abused by the female protagonist. , Mainly tells the story of the heroine dealing with various metaphysical events through live broadcast. The heroine is a great wizard from thousands of years ago. She is aloof and cold-hearted. The male protagonist is basically a background tool. The male and female protagonists get along step by step. If you want to see various metaphysical stories, you can check it out.

The heroine's behavior after her soul returns to its original place is really satisfying! At present, the performance of the male protagonist has not been outstanding. The most exciting turning point is the third son of the Song family. Haha, he is more or less worthy of being the biological brother of the female protagonist.

It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine has a good character, but I don't like the male protagonist. Maybe I don't like having a male protagonist's emotional line.

The stories I wrote for the live broadcast had too many bugs. There are also many typos Although I have only read less than a hundred chapters, the character of this male protagonist is too unattractive. He has only met the heroine a few times and has been calling her so affectionate for a few days. I can't stand some industrial saccharine.

It would be better if there is no male protagonist Shen, but only the eldest female protagonist who is beautiful alone. In a fantasy novel + female protagonist, it is like having a male protagonist, and they are all older. To be honest, I jump over them every time they get along, and I am very surprised.

It's very good-looking, and I feel it's better than other live fortune-telling books. Mainly, every case is very meaningful. Attractive. In addition, there are many fortune tellers, and the heroine feels as if she has practiced the path of ruthlessness. After seeing hundreds of pictures, I no longer want to read them. This one feels so sweet. The male protagonist is so doting. The kind of sweet and toothless pampering. Nice.

1. At the beginning, the heroine was abducted by a trafficker who was looking for a fake daughter. After she came back, she was so capable that she didn't call the police to deal with it, and just let her go. 2. I really can't stand the male protagonist. It was a very greasy and affectionate term when it came up. The heroine had just vowed not to go to school. This was a metaphysical and fantasy background, so he persuaded the heroine to go to school. Said academic qualifications are important. Such a big shot. What kind of education do you have? The emotional line imposes the feeling

1. Plot flaws: The whole story either kills people or harms others, and the reasons why everyone does evil are almost untenable. 2. Protagonist flaws: The heroine is too versatile, does everything in detail, and interferes too much in other people's fate or exposes privacy (such as the Yu Man incident, the person involved is Is she allowed to talk about those scars in front of tens of thousands of netizens? ) In addition, it can be seen that she wants to establish a decisive character for the heroine, but she can't stand it. The Song family can still patiently listen to a bunch of nonsense. There is too much nonsense in the descriptions of the Song family, and it is inevitable that the number of words is crammed. 3. Supporting character flaws: All the members are witty and forced to do things for the sake of the plot. One or two people come to ask for help but refuse to believe it. How can any normal person do this nowadays? 4. Writing defects: Almost all the cases follow the trend of "the client asks for help - the heroine points out a way out - the client does not believe it - the heroine proves it - the client believes it - and finally solves it beautifully according to the heroine's instructions." The direction is bland and there is no exciting and attractive narrative. The plots before and after are cleverly connected in the form of live broadcast help, but too many events will appear very fragmented!

The male protagonist is really annoying. This is the first time that a male protagonist is so annoyed, and a female protagonist has to deal with the Song family's real ink. The Song family has been asking people to jump out and criticize others. The heroine said that she would let the female ghost handle it, but she always said it but did not do anything. Stop watching

The heroine is very decisive in her work. She will also tell some stories from other places if she doesn't live broadcast the Madonna's live broadcast, but there are too few chapters. Please update.