The Young Commander's Little Petite Girl Got Mad at 70

Full of flaws. 1. The female protagonist's finger bleeds, and the male protagonist faints immediately. She says that the male protagonist fainted from blood. She tells the children that the male protagonist has heat stroke, and then later says that the male protagonist is a soldier who has seen blood. Are you schizophrenic? 2. Regarding the male protagonist's figure, is it okay to know that he has a good figure and that he is big? Every time I see a figure, I think of "explosive" and "big". If you weren't so short on words, I wouldn't want to complain. 3. When the male protagonist says, "Let's live a good life from now on," the female protagonist thinks this is a knock on herself? Is it necessary? Which one of you is sick? I'm particularly annoyed by this inexplicable thing. Don't read it, these are just examples and they are confusing.

The plot is simple and rough, the heroine does her job neatly and without being pretentious, the hero is a loyal big wolf dog, and the Gou Sheng Shen complains about the character. It is vivid and lifelike. For me personally, it is quite good. Except for a lot of typos and difficulty in reading in many places, there is no big problem. It is good to watch. If you like it, please continue to update.

The plot and characters are well written and worth following, but it would be better if there were fewer typos.

The author's memory is like a fish, so he wrote the next sentence and forgot the previous one. Such a confusing thing must have been written by AI. I'm quite convinced.

The logic is illogical and messy. 1. The police officer surnamed Feng wrote stupidly and did not have the qualities that a confidential officer should have. The male protagonist who is a soldier is afraid of bleeding... It's outrageous. 2. The hero's younger brother kidnapped women and children and wanted to be shot as a gangster. The kind-hearted hero gave a way to let his mother find the gangster... 3. Gou Sheng's writing was weird, very fragmented, and very annoying. 4. There are many small details in some places. Does the male protagonist earn 20, 28 or 38? Originally it was said that he would be able to do business in two years, but later it was said that he would be able to do business in three years. 5. The heroine clearly knows that the hero will be in danger if he goes to the mine. If he didn't stop him, he would wait for the mine to collapse and then run over in a hurry. His face turned pale, his face turned white again, his face turned pale again... There is no other word for "white face". 6. The heroine is full of murderous intent when she has nothing to do, and she only knows how to say cruel words without doing anything.

There are no bloody misunderstandings, the article is compact and very beautiful, and the characters are vividly described.

Three children have come out, and the writing is so pretentious, I am really speechless.

I have read more than 120 chapters now, and it is getting more and more boring. I am speechless. Do I faint? There is also the one who helped my sister out of the sea of misery because letting them live and repair the house cost more than expected. Send four children to school. When my own children go to school, let the male protagonist ask the principal if it is okay to go to the other two without asking and go directly to school. And the new clothes. The girl is pampered. I think it is right. But think about your own conditions. Your own children have not completely let go of their grudges against you, so they go to take care of other children. Forget it. Abandoned the article

Lu Qingye——Meng Wantang

It's ugly. I came here to be the first in the recommendation list. I don't have any common sense about life. Give up as soon as possible.