Interstellar Trader

The writing is okay, the transitions between sentences and characters are smooth, but not efficient enough, and the plot advances slowly. It is written in vernacular, and the character creation ability is good, but the protagonist's own ability is not good enough, and the protagonist is portrayed as a greedy, kind-hearted (Mother), and huge ambition, but his own ability and ambition are not equal. If the author doesn't change it, many readers will give up on this point. The subject matter is novel, and if it is changed well, it will definitely be a good book!

The previous chapters are all very interesting, and the plot is quite reasonable, but the last one is GG. I hope the author takes a good rest and adjusts his condition, and writes a better book in the new year.

Can you please update it quickly? One chapter in one day is not enough to read at all.

Not bad, you can chase it

I read Chapter 49 and it's not interesting. It's just nonsense every day...

The update speed should be faster. A few more chapters will be updated a day. One or two chapters a day will be updated and it will be boring to read.

Weak and incompetent! It's better not to write a book if the main character is so depressed. Getting the system is like the obscenity of a loser, someone's insinuation.

The subject matter is great! It's a pity that the author's character design of the protagonist is very poor, and the narration is very weak, and it's a bit cheesy, huh. The student here weighs 200 pounds and is a fat man. He also has a girlfriend who is very beautiful. Then he kicked the pig's feet and caught the ring. He is not sure about the family affairs, so he can't arrange everything about his parents directly. Don't worry so much. It's just poorly written. It would be better to write it in such a way that the protagonist's family is not short of money. Because of some different reasons at home, the protagonist breaks up with his girlfriend. To test the character's strength, you can write a more evil and strong character instead of this weak one. It's ugly to write like this. There are many tiny details in the article, and the writing is not good. The most important thing I saw is that the level of civilization that the author decided on is very different. A municipal civilization here should be equal to a second-level civilized nation. If you can get in touch with that thing, you can directly invade. This should be impossible, unless it can disturb the spirit or directly launch an invasion, but the suspicious civilization should not be able to do so. The content written by the author feels very fake. After all, it is already possible to invade, so it should be very simple to destroy reality and projection instantly. It's easy to just go online and buy books abroad, or steal other people's money. I found that there was a missing 0.1 In my bank card, and no one should have noticed. When I read this article, it felt like it was written like a sudden idea, but the outline is very messy. You may have accumulated too little, after all, the author said that he is a new author.

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Come on, work hard, Rashi!