The Beloved Cousin

I like this description, especially the way the two protagonists are together. I particularly admire the heroine's sense of fruitfulness and tenacity. However, when it comes to the hero's dream, there is a little explanation. Why is there a dream?

The characters are rich, the story is intriguing, and it is plain yet sentimental and tender. What kind of woman is Ah Li? I feel that she is very strong in life. The vibration of the butterfly wings will trigger a series of special effects. Her confidence and elegance in the story make me, a girl, heart-throbed in some aspects. The male protagonist sometimes seems to exist to promote the development of the story, but this is their life, whether it is like it or not, I am just a spectator. The content is ups and downs in an orderly manner, the text is compact, and very interesting (but the ending is a bit sloppy) Finally, I would like to thank the author for the good book (the above comments are personal remarks)

If you are not a book reader, you can read it. 📚"The pampering girl" Lazy wind comes home late📚 Although it's not my favorite time-traveling series about the Overbearing Prince, The Prince is not bad either. [Color] can be said to be the only novel that I read from the beginning without changing it in Qimao. This is a story where the male protagonist finally realizes his dream, turns the tide, has a happy ending, and the plot is relatively normal. The number of words is not too many, and it is not too watery.

How do you rate this book? Let's put it this way, I didn't jump to read this book, there was no misunderstanding in it, the male protagonist always doted on the female protagonist, just looking at it made me want to play games and watch Tik Tok, etc. I didn't have the desire to read it all in one go. If you are short of books, you can read it.

The plot is very exciting, and I really like the setting of the heroine. She is neither the Virgin nor the White Lotus. She dares to love and hate, has real abilities, does not panic when encountering problems, and escapes danger on her own. She is much better than the heroines in some novels. The male protagonist has the right to have strategies and only has the heroine in his heart. He ignores her admirers. There is no misunderstanding between the two. They talk about everything and trust each other. The ending is a little rushed. It would be nice if there are some stories about the two after their marriage. I haven't seen enough 😂

This is one of the more beautifully written articles I have read recently. But in my opinion, it's a little bit... You said that it's not a bad ending and you've already explained it. But if it's not a bad ending, the ending is really too hasty. Compared with the wonderful plot and various foreshadowing, the ending is really not exciting enough. But what I wrote before is really good, so I'll give it a thumbs up. The subject matter of this article is very novel, and it is the first time I have seen the identity of a "perfumer". Although there are some exaggerations, I can't find anything wrong with it. The author's writing style is good and can make people calm down and read. The concept of the story is okay, but actually the logic and suspense could be improved a bit. I finished reading it in three to five days. Generally speaking, except for the rushed ending, it was okay.

👉The plot is good, but the writing is so bad that I almost couldn't watch it, and the logic is very illogical. Is the author new? The logic is very strong when describing the character's mood and shaping the character's image. Although the plot logic is basically coherent, there are always gaps in the language and the explanation is not clear. Secondly, there is the language and vocabulary. The ordinary plot narration is like a running account and the language is stiff. Only when describing the attractiveness of the heroine's icy muscles, fragrant temples, and fragrant cheeks to the male protagonist, will he not hesitate to use a lot of language to describe it. And every time this kind of description is always very similar, like copy and paste, mechanical and without any new ideas. It was okay the first time I saw it, but after repeating it too many times, I could tell that the author was very interested in the heroine. The intention is good, but the expression needs to be strengthened. Again, the logic of the characters' behavior has no roots and vague explanations. It always feels like the characters are going crazy. For example, after the male protagonist confirms his feelings for the female protagonist, he will hug the female protagonist into his arms every time they meet in private. . Hello? Do you still remember that this is the ancient time and space view? How hungry must the male protagonist be to make such a big move every time. Reflecting the character's heart depends on details, and the author is also asked to strengthen the character's language description. And the details of people's expressions are not that dramatic, so it's best not to be too exaggerated when describing their expressions. Also, the supporting characters are very thin, and the protagonist's halo is too heavy, but it is still acceptable (it is a cool novel after all), but it is obvious that the author is inexperienced. 👉All in all, the plot has a strong female character, the overall setting of the male protagonist is pretty good, and the plot is quite attractive. But the writing style is so bad that I almost gave up the article when I got to Chapter 80 or 90. In the end, I stayed for the plot...

The author's common sense is completely at the elementary school level. It is very ridiculous to write Bianjing as a southern scenery at the beginning. There are also typos throughout the whole text, idioms are used incorrectly, many settings are inconsistent, and the ages of some supporting characters are unreasonable. There are only two sentences to describe the appearance of the male and female protagonists. This author does not know how to write ancient settings at all. Without the diamond, it is better not to work on porcelain. . .

After reading a hundred chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. The house fighting is too low-level, the characters are too thin, and there are too many villains and they are the oldest vicious villains. I came here for the elegance and sophistication of ancient Chinese novels, but this book gives me the impression that it is the kind of fairy tales and fantasy romances that I love to read in junior high school, but it is a shell of ancient Chinese novels. The same is true for emotional dramas. There is a lot of pen and ink, but the routine feels empty and the feeling of soul resonance is still lacking. But you can still watch it without thinking just for fun.

The author forcibly reduced the character's intelligence. The heroine competed with her cousin. During the second half break, when the enemy provoked her, she agreed to harm the heroine, and then asked the enemy to promise not to harm the heroine. This kind of forced intelligence writing can only show that the author has run out of skills and has given up.