At the Beginning of the Game, the Dead Man Was Married, and the Concubine Gua Became the Favorite of the Capital.

The heroine's character is very good, but the way the author wrote about the heroine and the second male lead is a bit disgusting. I couldn't stand it when I saw the second male lead's memory of the female lead's past life. A thousand years ago, the heroine flirted with the male lead like that, and she made a promise to meet him a thousand years later. I guess it was because of love! (PS; If the heroine is emotionless, why bother to seduce him? As a result, he becomes emotional, and it feels like the heroine is like green tea = (Ah?! She just regards you as her brother!)) It feels like she is with a third party (male protagonist)! ! !

I would like to ask, is this novel serialized quickly? Why is there no comment on such a beautiful novel? Why does it feel like there is no one and the author is too lazy to update it😂

When I saw Chapter 110, there were too many self-set plots in the middle, and the plot was confusing. One moment, a long red line on the arm meant a short life, and another moment a short one meant a short life. Did you write it yourself? Then you started to add settings randomly, the space rings came, and the plot contradicted some of the previous ones. It was a mess.

I haven't read such an interesting book in a long time. It's really wonderful. The author greatly requests updates.

Finally I found a good article, the writing is unique and I can't put it down! The plot is exciting and exciting, and will make you forget to eat and sleep! Big cheers for the author!

Author, you have too many typos, right?

The scene setting is okay at first, and the content is relatively good-looking at first, but there are typos, omissions, and stringing of words that are so wrong that it makes listening to the book uncomfortable, not to mention the reading experience. Moreover, the heroine's lifespan is set at the beginning. The longer the red line on her wrist is, the shorter the lifespan is. If the two lines are bordering, it's okay. But as it is written, the longer the red line is, the longer the lifespan is. After 500 chapters, it's all just to make up the words and arrange the plot, and it's endless.

It's worth a read, but it feels too wordy. After Chapter 250, there is no progress in revenge. The heroine is a princess, her status is high enough, and her Taoism level is high enough. There is no progress in taking revenge.

In order to save space, a lot of villains with the same brain circuit are introduced, and in order to make the plot follow the outline, the combat power is confused. The combat had no depth and was all about playing house and stacking buffs. I lost all interest when I saw the second master and senior brother playing in a turn-based manner. When I went to Yunling Pass to defeat the heaven-defying general and the protagonist, who seemed to have run out of rounds and could only stay at home and wait for the enemy to come, I felt bored. The next thing I served was the unopened heavenly path, with heavy thunder and small raindrops. Master Zhe Yuefeng Shuying Lan Qingxi, does the author know the name of the protagonist of his book?

The reason why I give it a general rating is not because the article is not good-looking. It's just that the author was too careless, with too many typos and omissions, and the writing of the characters was too confusing. He even made mistakes in writing the characters, and even changed their names midway. Although he said he could understand it, it made people feel very uncomfortable!