Ransomware at the Beginning? She Emptied the Enemy's Warehouse with Her Backhand

There are so many flaws that I don't even know which one to complain about first. 1. The plot collapsed in the later stage and was illogical. Although the logic above is not very good, at least it is not embarrassing to read as a cool article. 2. The last 30 chapters are obviously for the sake of ending. The villain who has been prepared for a long time in the early stage is gone, and the male protagonist is inexplicably enthroned and the two get married. 3. At first I thought there were many typos, but later I found that there were more nonsense words than typos. 4. There is a section in the middle that is probably missing at least 20 chapters (based on the author's level of nonsense), and the plot suddenly fails to connect.

The heroine's father has a Holy Mother's Heart, and he hates the Holy Mother's Heart the most.

1. I want to know why Prince Wen is still alive. What happened at the beginning and what happened at the end? The result is that he suddenly appears and disappears so suddenly. 2. I can write about what happened to Xiao Liuer and Xiao Zhuer after being rescued by the heroine! ! And Xiao Jiangli, didn't Xiao Jiangli help Song Ping'an find his family? How did you find it? What was the process? There is also no mention of whether she will become a talented person in both literature and martial arts. Song Ping'an returned to the Huns very suddenly. 3. I really haven't seen the women's army mentioned in the introduction. After all, the plot is also messy. Gu Jingyu has appeared and who is the top scholar? I'm wondering? 4. I haven't said whether the villains in the second and third bedrooms of the Song family have been eliminated. There are so few scenes in the fourth bedroom. I think we can talk more about Song's photo. Hey, the villain is written down so I don't know why it's missing. I'm so dizzy. 5. How is the heroine's father doing with explosives? Is he an official? Later it was also suddenly completed hahaha 6. The heroine's mother's clothing store can also be described a little bit, but I haven't mentioned it yet! ! ! ! ! ! 7. Come on. . . . . . . . . . . .

Not bad, the ending is perfect

Full of positive energy, I hope the Japanese will be destroyed as soon as possible in reality!

Too wordy and not decisive enough

It feels like I've read a theme outline

Generally

Chapter 137, abandon the article! Lots of typos

Good