Humiliated on Her Wedding Night, She Shocks the Prince's Estate with Twins

After watching it for so long, there is nothing to criticize! Marvelous! Every step is very logical. The author's writing is more exciting. Please update it soon.

Please update soon, I'm looking forward to it

After reading Chapter 81, I felt that the proportion of children's speech should be over 60%. It's true that children are cute, but if the cuteness is too much to express the cuteness and agility of the two cubs throughout the chapter, it is not very cute. On the contrary, the protagonist's scenes are very weak ~ quite ordinary and need to be improved.

It's very beautiful. I especially like the two babies. As the saying goes, good children belong to other people's families. The biggest winner in the book is the heroine. She has the selfless love of her mother-in-law and parents. Her brother loves her without any brains and the hero loves his wife deeply in his bones!

The more you write, the better the story becomes. The emperor is also a father. It's really good. I enjoyed reading it😃

A heroine who had traveled through time was so aggrieved that she was discovered by this scumbag, but there was nothing she could do about it, and then she was lured into that yard by this scumbag. So, author, what's the point of writing this useless novel? This scumbag kept the heroine in the courtyard for four years without even a grain of rice or a vegetable coming in. Then four years later, the scumbag opened the door to the courtyard without feeling any guilt. He even yelled at the heroine who had traveled through time and space, which was condescending. And then the heroine is really useless. She even asked, "You locked me up in this courtyard for four years and let me starve to death without even complaining. It's of no use at all. So what you wrote about traveling through time and doing hemp, wearing it or not, is a waste."

Readings for primary and secondary school students, I am an adult, so I won't read them.

I thought it was pretty good at first, but in Chapter 1064, I wrote the disgusting ghost Sun Xiangjun to go back to Beijing with the heroine brother, and I vomited when I saw him! An absolute failure! Worse than eating flies!! Resolutely abandon the negative comments!!! Bad bad review! Not worth a look!!

The characters are described in a single sentence, and throughout the whole story, the children's talk and children's talk, adults and children are so naive that they have almost no IQ, and the children's talk and wisecracks are more than enough.

The first hundred or so chapters are pretty good, but then it just gets into a numbers-crunching mode, and I don't understand why it's such a long book.