A Doomsday Bunker from the Start

The author may feel that he is writing a harem stud story, and it is not good enough, but in fact he has deviated from it, and the more he writes, the more he is bitten🐶

The writing is too verbose, describing a simple thing repeatedly. Some data also jump horizontally repeatedly, sometimes high and sometimes low. Many things come up one at a time, as if there is no outline.

It feels like a stallion novel

Even if you fart, you have to explain it for a long time. It's so tedious.

Our Lady

The writing is too long-winded, it keeps explaining, and it feels like a product instruction manual.

There are too many narrations

Part of the plot cannot withstand scrutiny (not to mention the setting), there is almost no character development, and the number of words is serious, so it was abandoned.

Overall it's pretty good, but some of the measures in the underground base are unreasonable. Except for meals, everything else actually needs to be charged, otherwise it won't be conducive to management.

Our Lady