After Two Thousand Years of Foundation Building, the Teacher Calls Me a Waste?

The vast majority of those who practice immortality on campus are little kids writing. If you have the time to watch a brat blowing off sex, you might as well use it to look for some more mature books.

It's good to watch, but how could it be so hasty at the end? It's just a decisive battle. Many plot characters are ignored. I'm speechless. The ending is poorly written for you. Are you in a hurry to end it? You shouldn't write it like this. The first 90% are invincible. Write a lonely ending at the end.

It's so childish, like a child's daydream.

It can be read smoothly, but the ending is a bit fast.

It's good, but there are too few chapters, and there are still many plots that haven't been added. It feels too boring to finish reading more than 100 chapters. I suggest you start with 1,000 chapters if you write in the future.