A Chaotic Bunch of Cultivators: I Grind My Way to the Top

There is no need for a male protagonist, the female protagonist can handle it all by herself.

The early stage was pretty good, but the later stage was a bit messy. Why did the two-year agreement have to be pushed to almost the finale? Is there no extra story for the male and female protagonists?

It's lighthearted, funny, and hilarious. I like it very much. (｡ì _ í｡)

It looks good, but there are a few typos.

I wonder if anyone has the same feeling. "Such a thing, such a terrible thing" is used too frequently. It appears almost N times in every chapter. It is very annoying when listening to the book. There are so many Chinese vocabulary words, why do you focus on this sentence?

This book can actually be written well. There are no problems with its early setting and structure, and it is also very good. However, the author did not show that the heroine is a bit humble to be honest, and her character is also a bit weak. In the world of immortality, the emphasis is on taking risks, fearlessly seizing opportunities, and striving for destiny, but she doesn't have that, and I feel that this work has nothing to do with decisiveness. Well, several characters in the plot have grudges against the heroine, and there is no problem in helping her grow. But the heroine can't help but hold grudges, or even say that she can't live without them. It's my own subjective concept. If you hate him, you should at least hate him. You said that he temporarily avoided the edge, then grew up and became stronger, and then went for revenge. But the plot is a bit too biased. It's far away from what I said. I even found the reasons why not to do it. Let's talk about it in general. Anyway, I don't know whether it's more realistic or more cool. You can say it's a cool novel, also because of the existence of system plug-ins, but the plots he writes are more realistic. This system is dispensable. I don't really understand why he writes it like this. There is a section that I feel very much. The heroine is about to be given a box lunch, and she has to beg others to forgive her. Let's not talk about rising up to resist. At least you have to try hard on your own. I don't understand this very much, and at the very least, he doesn't have the toughness and backbone to allow him to speak so lowly of himself.

The female protagonist is a nymphomaniac, a foul-mouthed and stupid woman, and relies on the gold-swallowing system to try her best to kill her. She is not strong enough and always wants to jump to higher levels to challenge her. Every time she is waiting to die, the male protagonist comes to her rescue. There is no common sense in the world of cultivation.

It feels like I watched a sex-transformed version of Dou Po Cang Qiong with a little bit of Douluo Dalu, Chaos Cloak Hammer Technique, Foundation Establishment Spiritual Liquid, Ya Fei, Level 8 Collapse... I saw so many shadows that I can't stand it anymore.

There are too many typos and the writing is mediocre. There are too many repetitive words and the ending is too hasty. It's not bad that the story has a beginning and an end!

Fine