Fleeing from Famine, I Picked up My First Assistant, My Young Husband.

The plot is too slow. After reading more than 400 chapters, the heroine is only 10 years old. After jumping to see more than 600 chapters, she is only one year older...

This feels like a friendship novel, not a romance novel. The male and female protagonists get along like family and friendship, and I want to complain about the ages of the female protagonist and the male protagonist. The progress of the book is 90%, and they are still twelve years old. I am very comfortable with this age. After doing so many things and writing so many things, are you sure that only one year has passed? The preparations are over, okay? What kind of Mohist army is being trained? What kind of beggars and orphans are you looking for to train? In one year, you can train a master of martial arts. Are you kidding me anymore? Anyway, I don't have any sense of vicarious love. I just feel that the friendship between two junior high school students is relatively deep. The female protagonist travels through time and the male protagonist is reborn. It can be regarded as a female supporting character in the book. Especially since there is a god in the back. This development is something I did not expect. The story line is also a bit ridiculous. For example, the female protagonist has a wood-type power. The female protagonist is not her biological child. She comes from a wealthy family, has a good memory, learns quickly, etc.

He can do so many things in one year, including escaping on foot, building houses, city walls, and farming. Isn't the author clueless? Why is it so laborious to extend the time? I'm speechless.

Where did Chapter 189 go?

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The writing style is not good, the writing is long-winded, and it has special powers. It's too much street writing, and it's abandoned.

The heroine Qi Banxia has the power of planting. While eating fresh fruits and vegetables, she can also leave melon seeds (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎). This self-sufficient setting is so convenient, and it is a treasure skill in troubled times. The male protagonists Lian Chengmo and Xia Xia go on the road together with their loving brothers and sisters, as well as a group of capable people from Yao Licun. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe✧*｡(ˊᗜˋ*) In a turbulent situation, such a group of people support each other and overcome difficulties together. This cohesion alone is enough to make people feel at ease (~˘▾˘)~ The performance of Yao Licun is also very surprising. The villagers are surprisingly united, and they did not expect that this place had a connection with the national army two hundred years ago. This hidden past adds a heavy sense of history to this seemingly ordinary village, and makes people wonder whether this unity stems from the deeply buried inheritance and belief (❃•̤ॢᗜ•̤ॢ)✲*｡☽˟ But the back is not so attractive ε=(´ο｀*))) Sigh...

Although there is nothing wrong with the writing, the plot progressed too slowly, so I abandoned it.

It doesn't look good, so abandon the article! It's so long-winded. I feel like I've said a lot about one thing.