She Puts up Bad Persuasion Papers by Herself, and the Little Junior Sister Is Trying to Rectify the World of Immortality.

You can see it, but it doesn't look good.

She whispered: "I just don't want to be friends with you anymore. Rong Zhao... I don't hate you because you are not wrong. People will always change after thousands of years of loneliness and thousands of years of time. You just changed. How can I blame you?" These words made Rong Zhao heartbroken. He looked at Jiang Xingmeng with slightly red eyes: "How can you not blame me?" Seeing that Rong Zhao seemed to want to cry, Jiang Xingmeng laughed: "Why are you still acting like a young man? The Immortal of the Qingming Festival has no regrets..." Rong Zhao closed his eyes: "That's right, no regrets for every move... No regrets for every move..." Jiang Xing dreamed that the chess game had been broken, so he had no intention of continuing to chat with them. Seeing Rong Zhao's lost look, he felt a little sad. He didn't want to say more at the moment: "... That's it. When my relatives and friends and I ascend to the sky and meet again, I hope that by then, you and I can make tea and drink together in the wind and snow like before."

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The early and middle stages are still interesting, and some inconsistencies can be dealt with. In the later stage, it is really difficult to explain. Some of the supporting characters have collapsed. The key point is that the mastermind behind the scenes has nothing to do. The Sanxian fools the stars into a mess, and at the end, everyone makes dumplings together 🙃️

Very beautiful, highly recommended, excellent female video. Although the novel is short, it is a very, very complete and beautiful story. There is no unfinished story, so feel free to read it! (I am actually a person who has a lot of requirements when reading novels. The heroine is a petty wife and I feel nauseous; the hero is a psychotic and petite character and I also vomit; the title tag says "career woman", but the main text is full of love or not, which makes me even more nauseous. There are some minor points or boring or poor writing that I can't read. So it is not easy for me to give a satisfactory evaluation of a novel without feeling any shortcomings. This article is really the best novel I have ever read on Qimao) [Story Completeness]: Great! No segment is perfunctory, the story is well-written and wonderfully written. When I saw that there were only 161 chapters, I thought it was another eunuch novel, but the beginning was interesting, so I continued reading. It turned out that there was no bad ending, the ending was complete, and there were basically no pitfalls. [Story content]: The story is very deep and connotative. It does not make the causes, processes, and results simple, childish, childish, or unrealistic just because of the short length. It's not a whole story about love, and there's no part where the main rival is in love and loves her to death. Family ties, destiny, mentorship, the heroine's character growth, and different roles in different camps are all written with flesh and blood, each with its own characteristics, without any streamlined labeling. [Author's writing style]: ① The whole article is funny and serious. It doesn't have the problem of being funny at the beginning and then becoming rigid and logical. It is very interesting until the last chapter. When it's time to be serious, the writing style is also serious. Apart from copying a few jokes, it doesn't have the same problems as primary school students' compositions. ② I think the most exciting aspect that best reflects the author's excellent writing style is foreshadowing. From the title to the last paragraph of the last chapter, all the foreshadowings are laid and fulfilled. Some small stories are thought to be funny subplots without follow-up, but in fact, the follow-up has greatly changed the main plot. The author is really outstanding in being able to lay down multiple foreshadowings from beginning to end in such a long story, allowing these foreshadowings to build the whole story into a complete and solid one. Summary: This is a refreshing article with humanistic connotations. The main idea is thought-provoking, and the writing also makes people relax and happy, full marks!

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This score of 7.9 Is too low. Overall, it is a fun and entertaining article with a complete plot and some depth. The character performance is a bit mindless, but the treatment is not abrupt. The length is not long but the plot structure is complete. There are many foreshadowings but there are pitfalls that must be filled in. Compared with many cool novels, the clean image is rare and full of flesh and blood, showing the complexity and richness of human nature. There are also some main parts of the plot that are specially hidden in order to express the mystery, so some readers have a not very good reading experience, but I personally think it is acceptable. Although some processing is not smooth enough and seems stiff, overall it is still well received.

I have been digging holes and foreshadowing, thinking that I am the king, but the ending is scrawled at the end, and nothing is expressed clearly. It is cloudy and foggy, and in the end it is just bronze. If the plot is straightened out, and all the previous expressions are written clearly in the back, it will be perfect. Unfortunately, it is only a beautiful beginning, but it is a bad ending.

The language is more vivid, but the author is also very poor in words and has a lot of vulgar words. Please don't use swear words repeatedly as humor!

Brainless writing is great